fic, Lost: The Essential Rescue Mission, PG, for elliotsmelliot

[janie_tangerine]

Well, I needed a break from the Hohoho assignment and I didn't want to lose the inspiration for this one when it hit me.

Title: The Essential Rescue Mission
Characters/Pairing: the blue shirt, Boone, Charlie, Tom with a Desmond and Sayid appearance
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: If this happens on the show I'll pay a dinner for all of my friendslist. Of

Comments

[falafel_musings]

Squee! I missed Blueshirt verse too! She's my hero.

So much cracky goodness. I loved Charlie saying hello to Blueshirt and Tom foolishly thinking that the shirt wouldn't recognise him. I loved Tom calling Boone 'boss' all the time and Charlie's exasperation at them both crushing on Jack. It was nice to see Blueshirt meet Boone at last! And when he was laying her out on the bed I actually thought I was about to see some Boone/Blueshirt porn!

it’s the short Brit who gave her to Desmond and who met that sad, sad fate (she’d have cried then, too; she also never managed to place her owner’s pretty discontinuous behavior after it,

Oh, Blueshirt. You know my pain. I loved the note too. “Des, you wanker, next time treat it better! Right on. Though he can still undo as many buttons as he likes.

[janie_tangerine]

Heee, thank you so much! I missed her too so it was a golden occasion! ;) even if I think I need a name for her at this point. ;)

Oh, Tom doesn't really know, does he? But still, he has good intentions. I just couldn't avoid the references to the mutual crush, poor Charlie would be sooo exasperated!

! And when he was laying her out on the bed I actually thought I was about to see some Boone/Blueshirt porn!

You know, next time they meet it's happening because seriously? That'd make me get a nosebleed. No, wait. I'm sure that when I write The Chests' adventures Boone can use Desmond's shirt once in a while.

Blueshirt is a very sensitive one -nods- and I needed to get that in. Glad you liked the note, too! And for what I'm concerned, he can absolutely lose any button he wants. Though maybe he should just unbutton them instead of losing them around.

[elliotsmelliot]

OMG!! OMG!!!

So I'm in my office at school, and killing time before my students' exam, and see this gem. I know I shouldn't read fic here, but I couldn't help myself. I should have closed the door because a) the squee that came from me when I discovered the POV and the mission and b) because an economics student wandered into my office looking for a room in this building, and I had shut everything down so she could look something up on my computer. But it was worth it. Oh, Janie, it was worth it!

There were so many wonderful moments in here. For the entire concept is brilliant. Forgot lunch, I will fly you to Canada if we ever get to see this!

I love how you opened with the shirt’s thoughts on being on a chest versus in a closet, and all her journeys. I also like how Desmond kept it safe, though frankly Penny not understanding means she needs to get her eyes checked ASAP.

Hey, shirts never had any sense of time passing anywayIndeed! I liked all her asides like this

[janie_tangerine]

Darlton, make this happen! I want to see Canada! ;) ;) Aw, seriously, thank you SO much, I'm beyond thrilled that you liked it! Ouch for the location and the student, but glad it was worth it! As soon as I had the idea I just had to run with it, it was too good to pass.

Maybe Penny was mistaken because she only saw her in the night and not in her best condition? But surely she should check her eyes just to be sure! I couldn't resist the shirt's asides, writing from her POV has to be one of the funniest things I'll ever do. Glad that you liked the Freud thing!

The shirt should replace Jacob because clearing it is all knowing, Indeed! I'm sure it'd be a way more benevolent deity. And isn't that shirt a smart one, flirting with the pretty when she has the chance? They were totally the unlikely trio of doom but they worked together too well for such a task. And I couldn't resist the multiple Jack crushes. That man must have a line outside his door

[jaydblu]

OMG, you are so funny, it's brilliant! Of course the shirt would have feelings...being on Desmond would inspire that.
Boone and Tom crushing on Jack...too funny. An appearance by our dear departed Charlie is always welcome as well! Now, thanks to the ghost three, the shirt can continue to perform her duty of being close to Desmond's body at all times.

Just so many moments in here that made me chuckle...I love your crack!fic.

[janie_tangerine]

Ha, thank you so much!! I just have a crack out of writing this stuff, glad it's amusing! And LOL, I'm sure she has feelings! Well, to be fair and to make shameless promotion, I had another blue shirt POV here even if I like this one better. And come on, Tom was shamelessly in love with Jack! And Boone too actually ;) ;) and yeah, now she's ready and set to be with Des for at least another three seasons! Thanks so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed this.

[sapphire_child]

*shrieks with laughter*

I haven't read Lost fic in months but this was just...just...BRILLIANT! Omg, I know this is going to sound kind of weird but you write inanimate objects SO well. And imagining Sayid reading out Charlie's words just about made me piss myself from laughing so hard XD

BRILLIANCE.

[janie_tangerine]

Oh, don't worry about it sounding weird! Hey, it is weird in the first place but I have the time of my life when I write the blue shirt. I'm really so glad you liked it!! And I couldn't resist Sayid reading the note. It made a much more awesome effect, didn't it? Thank you so much!! XD

[sapphire_child]

You are so very, very welcome. I just...I just loved this. There's no other word for it.

Squee!

[thespiansparkle]

OMG LOVE THIS! Love YOU!!!

This is SO awesome and hilarious and all of the voices are so dead-on that it's freakin' amazing. “Of course. For your interest, Charlie, I am not interested in Desmond even if I have to say he’s a very fine man. I’m not in let’s-try-to-make-the-buttons-fall-while-being-invisible club.” That may have been my favorite. I say "may" because ALL of it was so awesome.

This is amazing, my darling, and I cannot get enough =)

[janie_tangerine]

*totally loves you too*

Hee, thank you so much! I just have the time of my life when I write blue shirt crack and I kinda loved how that line came out, too, but I'm biased. Thank you so much!! ♥