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anonymous March 2 2009, 20:28:30 UTC
Yes, please to chapter 6. I need to know Doris's secret, it is seriously driving me crazy *grin*. Awesome chapter, loved every word. srobinso21

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jailynn24 March 3 2009, 22:35:44 UTC
Doris's secret will be a secret for a little while longer. *laughing* Sorry. I'm glad that you like the story though. **hugs**

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anonymous March 2 2009, 22:25:06 UTC
oh my....this gives me butterflies!
Marci

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jailynn24 March 3 2009, 22:36:21 UTC
Oh, that makes me so happy! **hugs** Thanks, Marci

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jyl22075 March 2 2009, 22:45:23 UTC
I loved this chapter, Jai! It's so perfect that Rocky has whisked her off on his motorcycle. He really is perfectly opposite to Coop which is both exciting and strange.

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jailynn24 March 3 2009, 22:37:44 UTC
Rocky is so much fun to write for. I love that edge that he has. *grin* I'm so happy that you are enjoying the story, Angel friend. **hugs** Thanks for the comment love.

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eertyecal March 3 2009, 00:34:51 UTC
I'm really starting to love this story. I need to know Doris' secret like yesterday **begs with puppy dog eyes** I just knew the rubbing above the eyebrow would be a trait they shared. I could envision the whole ending him handing her the helmet and driving away with her on his motorcycle, what girl couldnt' fall for that? Nice job Jai. **hugs** Tray

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jailynn24 March 3 2009, 22:41:58 UTC
yay!!! That makes me grin so big. I'm so thrilled you are liking this story that much. The rubbing of the eyebrow/forehead thing is a John tick. *laughing* It had to be added. Doris's secret is going to stay secret for a little bit longer, but it will be revealed. *grin* Thanks for the comment hugs, Tray. **hugs** Happy birthday!!!

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anonymous March 3 2009, 12:15:30 UTC
You did a great job describing Daisy and the feelings she is having. I love the fact that you haven't created a pod Ashlee like the unmentionable writers have. I also love Rocky, there is just something about a bad boy on the outside who is a good boy on the inside. You're doing a fantastic job, so it's a deal on chapter 6. I want it now!! oops, now I'm being bossy! sorry, not!--BettyB

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jailynn24 March 3 2009, 22:48:22 UTC
I really want to like Daisy, but the writers suck at writing her character...well they suck at writing everyone's character actually. *lauging* I'm so happy that you are liking, Rocky. He is a lot of fun to write for. *grin* Thank you so much for the love, Betty. It means the world to me. ***hugs***

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