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jailynn24

Fiction: Shattered Reflection chapter 5

Mar 02, 2009 12:04

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rocky, 40 fics for lent 2009, bucwild, buzz, doris, ashlee, fiction, daisy, shattered reflection, guiding light

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anonymous March 3 2009, 20:10:25 UTC

::sighs:: This is just so wonderful! I am loving every minute of this! Of course I want another chapter! **hugs**

clsicmoviequeen March 3 2009, 20:13:16 UTC

That was me by the way. lol.

jailynn24 March 3 2009, 22:44:44 UTC

*grin* How was your test?

jailynn24 March 3 2009, 22:43:49 UTC

**hugs** I'm so happy to know that you are enjoying the story. It means so much to me that you comment all the time. **hugs** You rock!

angelzqq March 5 2009, 01:59:16 UTC

I thought I read this yesterday but I didn't comment so I realized I started but didn't finish. I think I was trying to get something posted, or something like that *pointed look*. This story is great. I love how Rocky is and I love how he is with Ashlee. And it's nice that even after she and Ashlee haven't been close, Daisy is still loyal to her. Great job! *hugs*

twinnie

jailynn24 March 6 2009, 03:10:06 UTC

You're still not going to make me feel guilty for wanting another chapter of your amazing story. *shakes head firmly* Isn't going to happen. *wicked grin* Thank you for the twinnie love and hugs. **hugs** They always make me giddy.

~Sissy

angelzqq March 6 2009, 23:08:22 UTC

Brat! lol *hugs*

twinnie

jailynn24 March 7 2009, 02:11:11 UTC

*sticks tongue out* :p

*hugs*

sissy

maurinak March 18 2009, 01:16:14 UTC

Yet another great chapter, Jai! I loved Rocky and Daisy's conversation and it was great to get inside Daisy's head. You do that so well, getting into your characters heads. It always makes your stories so multi-dimensional.

I'm really loving Rocky and Ashlee's chemistry. I get those funny butterfly feelings in my tummy when I read your scenes with them. *grins*

Even though I want to keep reading, I'm beat, but thank you for ending my day on the perfect note. *hugs*

Have a great night!
~Emm

jailynn24 March 18 2009, 13:30:01 UTC

*grin* I do love trying to get inside the heads of the characters. It makes them more real to me, so I'm thrilled you like that aspect as well. The Rocky-Daisy conversation was a lot of fun to write. I wanted to show how close that are without it being another Coop-Daisy relationship. Its a different dynamic.

*happy dance* I'm so freaking happy that you get butterflies with Rocky and Ashlee. That is like the best compliment I have gotten in a while. ***hugs** Thank you so much for the comment love, Emm. I hope you slept well and had pleasant dreams. ***hugs***