Fiction: When You Weren't Looking: Chapter 16, 17 and 18

[jailynn24]

Here are the previous chapters:

chapter 1, chapters 2 and 3, chapters 4 and 5, chapters 6 and 7, chapter 8 and 9, chapters 10 and 11, chapters 12 and 13, chapters 14 and 15

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Comments

[anonymous]

I love the way you're intertwining all these characters and making it so interesting. I've always loved your ability to put twists and turns and surprises into your stories and yet have everything make perfect sense. I think this story is just s preview of all he great stories your have written since. I knew from the first that you had a gift. Thanks for reminding me how it all started. I'm enjoying the trip down memory lane.--BettyB

[jailynn24]

Thank you so much, Betty. *grin* I'm so happy that this story can bring you some joy again. And thank you again for the kind and amazing words. You continue to amaze me with your sweet and generous support. You always make my day a much brighter one. **hugs**

[rivilli]

yay, she can see! Awesome! :) I love love love Cooplee in this fic. This is how I wish it was right now on GL. You are such an amazing writer!
And Kane is so creepy....

[jailynn24]

*grin* Yeah, Ashlee is getting her sight back. It's about time, huh? *laughing* I'm so happy that you are enjoying the story. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and reply. *grin* And thank you for the kind words. **hugs** They mean so much to me.

[jyl22075]

I love how nervous Coop was and how sweet. *grin* Also, Buzz teasing Coop was one of my favorite moments. Have I mentioned that Kane creeps me out?

[jailynn24]

*laughing* You might have mentioned the Kane thing before... maybe once... *grin* Buzz was my favorite part of these chapters. I loved writing him as teasing his son. *big goofy grin* Thank you again for replying, Jenny. It really means the world to me. **hugs**

[eertyecal]

I have been re-reading these chapters as you've put them up but haven't had alot of time to comment this week. It feels to me as if the whole world just went spastic this week. My normal hectic life has risen to a whole new octave this week with the election, the stupid soap spoilers and I've spent most of my waking moments outside of work at my grandma's bedside. We have a large family and it seems like almost all of them have been here this week. I know that by the end of week she will be gone and while I feel bad for me, I can't for her. She has waited 28 years to be reunited with grandpa and I know euphoria awaits her. Wow, sorry I got so off track. Just wanted to let you know that the re-reading of your story has reminded me that there is still a sane serenity out there. Thanks Jai and I look forward to the new chapters. *hug* laceytree

[jailynn24]

I'm so sorry to hear about your grandma. I know that must be hard on you. ***hugs*** You and your family will all be in my prayers during this difficult time. **hugs** I'm so happy that this story could bring you some peace. Heaven knows that is in short supply lately. I hope you continue to find comfort in the chapters and stories I post. If you ever want to talk you can email me anytime. **hugs** Jamiewagnor@yahoo.com