So Much Mine: Section Eight

[wedspawn]

Pairing: JaeHo
Rating: Overall NC-17 (This section... possibly R?)
Hot chocolate and bunnies provided by: Ranalore
Summary: Section Eight.
The beginning of a shifting relationship. Hot Korean boys. Sex. Dancing and some angry words. Not necessarily in that order. Not necessarily in each section.

Section One; Section Two; Section Three; Section Four;

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[blu_olivz]

“There’s something between us, Jaejoong. I don’t know what it is but it’s there.” Yunho said suddenly, examining the thoughts that now crowded his mind. “We push and pull at each other. Sometimes there is nothing that I want more than to strangle you until you choke and turn blue and then…sometimes…”

“Sometimes it’s hard not to put myself in your hands so you can choke me.” Jaejoong whispered, his fingers ghosting over Yunho’s wrist. “I don’t want to fight with you, Yunnie.”

aaaargh it's so goooood and so truuue xDDD
i look forward to the next chapter!

[wedspawn]

thank you again! hopefully i can get it out if not today then tomorrow. my brain is a bit thin at the moment :)

it's nice to see what pieces strike different people. thank you again for reading!

[wedspawn]

no... don't be late for school! it will always be here! ::::grins::: go to school!

we'll have to see what yunho does at this point. probably be obtuse. he's a bit obtuse!

i am glad you liked it! ♥♥♥! but don't be late for school ::::Grins::::

i'll update again, promise!

[lavhire]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

OMG.. your fic ish so nice..

“There’s something between us, Jaejoong. I don’t know what it is but it’s there.” Yunho said suddenly, examining the thoughts that now crowded his mind. “We push and pull at each other. Sometimes there is nothing that I want more than to strangle you until you choke and turn blue and then…sometimes…”

I LIKE IT XDDD

[wedspawn]

♥♥! thank you! i am happy you like it!

i hope you'll continue to follow and find it as enjoying! i really am having a good time writing it.

[audacitas]

The two boys just need to relax and be frank with each other. LOL I second Su, let's just lock them up in a closet till that happens. XDD

Jaejoong, you’re breathing wrong. You’re stepping wrong. You sleep too hard. You slurp when you eat noodles.”

that line cracked me up! XDD

“I have many sisters.” Jaejoong made a face. “That I can even see the bathroom is a miracle.”

... no actually, I think he's the one that's spending the most time in the bathroom. :O

Great job as always! :D and it's not as angsty as the rest! :DD [not that I mind angst though. XD]

[wedspawn]

♥♥♥! thank you for reading! and liking it! i'll probably get a bit less angsty as the sections move along. :) hopefully it will be a good ending that everyone enjoys!

and yes, su probably is right. :) junsu is usually right!

[kahel_luna]

so much pushing and pulling from before but now i'm happy at least there's recognition that a problem does exist between them and that they both want resolution - not in a form of escape.

i admire both of them for figthing their desires on such a tempting moment. really. haha.

i hope the hesitation in their touch gets toppled over by fiery wants soon. hahaha.

but i'm so happy you update everyday.~ it makes me madly refresh my friend list when it hits 2pm our time. Really.

[wedspawn]

::::grins::: i try to update every day. the point of this fic is really to get me back into the swing of writing more than a 1000 words a day. i have a larger project that i need to work on and i need to stretch out that brain muscle for writing. :) jaeho seemed like a good exercise to do that in.

i am hoping to get an update out today but i might have to post it late or maybe tomorrow. i promise that if i skip today it's because i just didn't have enough time to get it done. heck, i started section 8 three times before i found the right beginning scene so it might take me a bit to find the start of section nine. hopefully not.

and yes, i agree with you! i think they should just be consumed by their wants but the realism of coming to grips with emotions is just so hard to ignore.

i am glad you like it! ♥♥♥♥ thank you for reading along!