Happy New Year, shizukanai (formerly pxahyoo)! Exchange fic: "Slowly, Breathlessly Swept Away"

[beecassiopeia]

Title: Slowly, Breathlessly Swept Away
Rating: PG-13
Genre: slices of life, drama
Warning: nada. though in this AU, please consider the idea of man loving man is not an abnormality (and possibility of mpreg, though nothing major).
Summary: Jaejoong falls for the beautiful eyes, those that gaze softly at another man; falls for that bright smile, the

Comments

[creedee]

Woooowww....

[shizukanai]

Thank you for the lovely read, I really enjoyed it!! Especially loved how you described the surrounding and Jaejoong's focus on Yunho's eyes. Truth to be told, I don't remember which prompts I've submitted beside the one where Yunho got into an accident? I'm forgetful like that XD Anyways I found JJ really sweet, how he answered to Yunho's coldness with friendliness and how he treated Yona. And goodness, soulfighters as best friends ;A; Yesss! Thank you for that! x) Yunho came off as so gruff at first (towards JJ that is) but in the end, that was a beautiful change. When you described how he smiled at JJ, I was squealing inside *~* Oh and that brief hug scene when Yunho and Yona were about to leave, oh gosh. That was so powerful, more breathtaking than a kiss would've been in that very moment.

[tapzz]

omg..i loved it..i really like jaejoong's character here..he is very sweet..
thank you for participating..:))

[chikazukenai]

Jaejoong is such a sweetheart here. I wanna know what crawled up Jung's butt and made him all grumpy with Jaejoong from the moment they first met.

[chikazukenai]

Jaejoong is such a sweetheart here. I wanna know what crawled up Jung's butt and made him all grumpy with Jaejoong from the moment they first met.

[xzeffirx]

totally agree, can't understand why he had to be so cold towards Jae, seemingly with no reason. Plus, as Changmin said, last year he was using Jae's art piece as example in class, so he should have known him, right?