Hanahaki byou / 花吐き病

[jaehee18]

Title: Hanahaki byou / 花吐き病
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG-13, R [for language]
Genre: Fantasy!, Non-Au/Au, Romance, Angst
Beta: jaan30
Length: One-shot
Summary: Love, for JaeJoong, came in form of petals.
Author's note: I wrote this thing because I absolutely loved the idea of this "disease" that was created by fans. This fanfic was inspired by this idea.

Comments

[hinokahoko11]

I pity jaejoong at the beginning, one-sided love sure is hard,and it took years for him to receive yunho's love.
But srsly, i also like reading a one sided love with jaejoong as the one loving yunho. I am so complicated!kekeke
But yay for happy ending. !<3
💖💖💖💖

[jaehee18]

I've never been in love and my sole object of affection [kind of love-like] is ChangMin, but I can't call that real love as I like the projection of his personality [because I'll never get to know his real personality and still like him unless we become friends, which is kind of impossible lmfao], so i don't really know how hard one-sided love is. But I image it is kind of hard. Sorry for rambling.

Thank you so much for reading and posting a comment! <3

[theladysilver]

OH MY GOSH! ADDIEEEE!! I LOVE THIS! I LOVE THIS! This has got to be your best one yet! The plot is unique. I just love it. The overall tone of the fic was light despite of the angst. I don't know if it's just me, but somehow it felt like it has this underlying fluff, or maybe it has this hopeful tone to it. I really like how you wrote it. You've improved quite a lot BB!!
You must write a sequel in Yunho's POV for this. You must!! I would really like to know what Yunho was thinking in all this. How he felt when Changmin became overprotective over Jaejoong when it comes to him. I'm sure as a leader he has noticed it! And most importantly, I want to know how and when he realized that he loves Jaejoong. And what made him decide to reach out, and call him. I also really want to know how their conversation went and what will happen after.
Good job on this one BB!! I would really love a sequel for this.

[jaehee18]

Omggg <3333 I am so glad you love it >///////< I felt sorry for kind of ruining the plot tbh lmao the hanahaki byou disease is kind of poetic for me so I think that if someone would write it with more poetical feeling it would definitely be great~. Ahhh I don't know if I improved or not omg >////<

I will try my best to write it and I hope my muse will side with me in this :-)) <3

Thank you for reading and posting a comment, bb!! <3

[theladysilver]

I'm telling you BB, you did not ruin it. Yes, you are right about the hanahaki byou disease being poetic. But I think you were still able to keep the poetic quality of the disease. The whole tone of your fic may not be poetic in general, but there was a bit of underlying poetic feeling with regards to the disease and it's conotations. And I'm telling you, you have improved BB! I've been consistently following your drabbles and drabblezillas, and I assure there is improvement!

You can do it BB! I am hoping that your muse will side on you with that. Addie's muse, please don't leave us hanging on this fic! DX

You're welcome BB!! <3 <3 <3

[theladysilver]

BTW BB, Your other DP pic that you used in replying to other comments, the YunJae one? The one below:

[kattan69]

So what does the white rose means......does it mean he is loving Yunho lesser or does it mean his disease is on the last stage before death or does it mean Yunho is also starting to love Jae.....cause losing Jae makes him realise he loves Jae. We need another part to explain it. Hopefully you will continue writing and give us some closure.

[jaehee18]

As I said i my last author note, it is a happy ending XDD -> YunHo loves Jae. The change of color in the last rose also means that there was a change of feelings from YunHo's part and as the disease stopped :DD well ... love is in the air~

I hope I can write a sequel, but my muse hasn't been that kind to me these past months :(

Thank you for reading and posting a comment!

[jaehee18]

If my muse cooperates ... gladly!! <3

Thank you for reading and posting a comment! <3

[jaehee18]

Oh my god! This is such a nice comment T___T I am so glad you love this and I am honored it is one of your new favorites even tho I don't feel like I deserve such compliment >////< I will try my best to write a sequel!!

Thank you so much for reading and posting this lovely comment ;;