Hanahaki byou / 花吐き病

[jaehee18]

Title: Hanahaki byou / 花吐き病
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG-13, R [for language]
Genre: Fantasy!, Non-Au/Au, Romance, Angst
Beta: jaan30
Length: One-shot
Summary: Love, for JaeJoong, came in form of petals.
Author's note: I wrote this thing because I absolutely loved the idea of this "disease" that was created by fans. This fanfic was inspired by this idea.

Comments

[theladysilver]

OH MY GOSH! ADDIEEEE!! I LOVE THIS! I LOVE THIS! This has got to be your best one yet! The plot is unique. I just love it. The overall tone of the fic was light despite of the angst. I don't know if it's just me, but somehow it felt like it has this underlying fluff, or maybe it has this hopeful tone to it. I really like how you wrote it. You've improved quite a lot BB!!
You must write a sequel in Yunho's POV for this. You must!! I would really like to know what Yunho was thinking in all this. How he felt when Changmin became overprotective over Jaejoong when it comes to him. I'm sure as a leader he has noticed it! And most importantly, I want to know how and when he realized that he loves Jaejoong. And what made him decide to reach out, and call him. I also really want to know how their conversation went and what will happen after.
Good job on this one BB!! I would really love a sequel for this.

[jaehee18]

Omggg <3333 I am so glad you love it >///////< I felt sorry for kind of ruining the plot tbh lmao the hanahaki byou disease is kind of poetic for me so I think that if someone would write it with more poetical feeling it would definitely be great~. Ahhh I don't know if I improved or not omg >////<

I will try my best to write it and I hope my muse will side with me in this :-)) <3

Thank you for reading and posting a comment, bb!! <3

[theladysilver]

I'm telling you BB, you did not ruin it. Yes, you are right about the hanahaki byou disease being poetic. But I think you were still able to keep the poetic quality of the disease. The whole tone of your fic may not be poetic in general, but there was a bit of underlying poetic feeling with regards to the disease and it's conotations. And I'm telling you, you have improved BB! I've been consistently following your drabbles and drabblezillas, and I assure there is improvement!

You can do it BB! I am hoping that your muse will side on you with that. Addie's muse, please don't leave us hanging on this fic! DX

You're welcome BB!! <3 <3 <3

[theladysilver]

BTW BB, Your other DP pic that you used in replying to other comments, the YunJae one? The one below:

[jaehee18]

I have it from here!

http://mogulychee.livejournal.com/17562.html

^^

[theladysilver]

Thanks BB!! XD Her other icons are <3 !!!