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“Wait a minute…she’s waking up!” someone said. “She’s alive, we’ve got her, we can go now,” and she felt herself being picked up and carried in the arms of someone running the hell away from wherever they were. Slowly the pieces of memory fell into place-Zhjaeve and Qara, and Sydeny Natale and the True Names, and facing the Shadow ( Read more... )
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Nice flow, I think. This line: "Because she was totally fucked, in so many different ways" made me chuckle a bit.
The rape conversation was really interesting. It wasn't--there was any of you, the author, cluttering it up, so it was totally the male guy's thoughts and ideas and convictions and the author's personal philosophy was clearly absent in favor of getting inside this screwed-up guy's head. Um. If that made sense.
Their relationship is, at least from my point of view, believable, and I'll just have to play it myself to see how IC they/he are/is.
Well, I enjoyed it in that OH GEEZ THIS TOTALLY SUCKS kind of way. ;)
NOW I MUST COME AND TAKE YOUR COMPUTAR
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*phails*
Hee hee, I like that line.
aw...*blushes* it makes sense. it makes very good sense. *blushes*
He's more IC in the second one than the first, I think, aside from the blabbing...but he tends to talk in short, choppy lines, like “Can’t imagine why that would be.” (In fact, there was one cutscene in which he had a whole three lines to say...I was shocked. And drooling because his voice is, of course, omg t3h smex.)
aw, thanks! *beams*
OMGEEZE YOU CAN'T BECAUSE SEE MY BARD CHARACTER IS EFFED LIKE WHOA AND SO I HAVE TO PLAY THE WHOLE GAME OVER WITH LAURA INSTEAD WHICH IS GOOD ROMANTICALLY SPEAKING (and really what else matter?) BUT CRAPPY IN TERMS OF OMG THIS GAME IS LONG.
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SEE? SEE? THAT IS WHY BARDS EFFING SUCK.
SERIOUSLY. THE MOST I EVER LEVELED ONE WAS TO LEVEL FIVE. AND THEN I COULDN'T STAND DYING IN EVERY. SINGLE. ENCOUNTER AND LET HER WASTE AWAY.
HAHA. I MISSPELLED AWAY LIKE SIX TIMES JUST NOW. S != A FINGERS. COME ON. GET IT TOGETHER.
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Well, it's not entirely her fault I suckzorz at making my keep defensible. But her complete and utter lack of any/all combat abilities (coupled with the fact that the game FORCES you to wield a sword, which OMG I'M NOT GOOD AT as a GNOME for *insert deity*'s sake) is grating. I just want to get to the part where...um...well, suffice to say it's an event that adds tragedy to the Bishop storyline. Yeah. That's the ticket. *totally spoiled herself at the official NWN2 forums*
HAHAHAHA. *POINTS AND LAUGHS*
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That's HOTT. All of it was. I like the rape conversation. Very interesting. I really like that pairing, even if I have no idea about the game from which they come.
The "Rape is...a bother" line made me think of "troublesome" which of course led to Shikamaru...and the thought of Shikamaru actually talking (with a girl, in bed) about the cons of raping someone. >.>
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OOoh, I'm glad you liked! The pairing is interesting--I love writing/reading fanfic for this game, because the character you create is fully yours to control, you know? And you can develop her as much as you like, and so the real challenge is keeping the game characters in-character as you have them interact with the character you've created. So it goes all sorts of different ways--each story is different, because there's a different locus, and so everyone reacts differently.
Anyway the important thing is here's a decent picture of Bishop. It's the best one I could find...anyway...*drools*
*giggles*
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Coolio. (Write more!)
He is quite smexy for a game character. Dark and rugged. Yum.
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(also, it's so much fun to have Bishop yelling. homg. fun.)
And his voice! I'll try to find you an audio clip of it.
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