leave it to castiel to be the voice of reason *snort* i really enjoyed this stroy, was creepy along some bits, i totally liked your ruby...Thanks for sharing :)
Oh, this was totally enthralling and great. Very well-written, and super freakin' creepy. Sage 'n' Dean is almost as adorable as Sam 'n' Dean -- even I got a little jealous on Sam's behalf ;) Thanks so much for posting! Great job!!!
This was really good. I love little Sage she's adorable. Your characterization of Cas was spot on he amuses me with how monotone he is. Not to sound pushey or anything but have you thought of maybe making this a 'verse or something, I wouldn't mind reading more. *grin*
Not to sound pushey or anything but have you thought of maybe making this a 'verse or something
That's not really pushy at all. And the honest answer was no a few days ago. That is, until I opened my e-mail, read my comments, and had silentpoetry1 point out that many people couldn't be wrong.
So, the new answer? Yes. I will more than likely be writing more and making it into a 'verse. I'm kicking around a few ideas at the moment.
I would especially like to add that I'm almost allergic to kid!fics, same with kids in movies- cannot stand them 99% of the time (love children in real life, but cannot stand cute!Hollywood!blonde! children that come up in films and fics). This being said, I thought Sage was lovely, you wrote her beautifully, her connection to Dean seemed very real, and she did not irritate me once. This is damn near miraculous- well done!
I'm really glad that my careful manipulation worked! There is actually a very secret formula to get just about anyone to read and like a kid!fic. The trick is getting your reader to open your story when you put it as a warning or a genre.
Wow, couldn't stop reading. Absolutely engrossing. Loved Dean with Sage, the way he'd be going along, taking care of her like it's second nature to him, and then he'd get kicked in the face with the fact that oop, she's a little girl.
You are so right about Sam, he's never really had to share Dean, no way would he like it.
I'd like to second the request for you making this a verse, as I'd love to read more of Dean's journey to controlling his new power. Also I'd love to watch Sam and Sage's relationship grow and deepen.
I had the most fun writing Dean's unconscious parenting with his moments of realization. He's used to taking care of someone and the readjustment to caring for a child came a little easier than he expected, which made it the most fun to write. Sam's jealousy was just icing on the cake *g*
I'd like to second the request for you making this a verse, as I'd love to read more of Dean's journey to controlling his new power. Also I'd love to watch Sam and Sage's relationship grow and deepen.
Your request has been heard. And I am more than likely going to write another piece or two. I'm playing around with a few ideas right now. I don't know if any of them will work out, but I promise to try
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I'm glad you liked it!
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Very well-written, and super freakin' creepy.
Sage 'n' Dean is almost as adorable as Sam 'n' Dean -- even I got a little jealous on Sam's behalf ;)
Thanks so much for posting!
Great job!!!
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Thanks for the comment and I'm glad to know you enjoyed it!
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That's not really pushy at all. And the honest answer was no a few days ago. That is, until I opened my e-mail, read my comments, and had silentpoetry1 point out that many people couldn't be wrong.
So, the new answer? Yes. I will more than likely be writing more and making it into a 'verse. I'm kicking around a few ideas at the moment.
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I would especially like to add that I'm almost allergic to kid!fics, same with kids in movies- cannot stand them 99% of the time (love children in real life, but cannot stand cute!Hollywood!blonde! children that come up in films and fics). This being said, I thought Sage was lovely, you wrote her beautifully, her connection to Dean seemed very real, and she did not irritate me once. This is damn near miraculous- well done!
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But I'm glad you liked the story over all!
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You are so right about Sam, he's never really had to share Dean, no way would he like it.
I'd like to second the request for you making this a verse, as I'd love to read more of Dean's journey to controlling his new power. Also I'd love to watch Sam and Sage's relationship grow and deepen.
Thank you for sharing.
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I'd like to second the request for you making this a verse, as I'd love to read more of Dean's journey to controlling his new power. Also I'd love to watch Sam and Sage's relationship grow and deepen.
Your request has been heard. And I am more than likely going to write another piece or two. I'm playing around with a few ideas right now. I don't know if any of them will work out, but I promise to try
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