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[jackmaybenimble]

It's been a long time and a lot of inconsequential words. But this is for docfraiser8. She knows why. (There's also a line for soaked_in_stars. You'll know it when you see it, face.)

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[soaked_in_stars]

WORDS!!! And such lovely ones at that. This is fantastic, and not at all an episode I would think about with them but chriiiist, it makes such perfect sense.

And I love this -

“We’re not having this conversation.” // “Well one of us may not be.”

PERFECT. The voices are so them throughout this, especially the Congresswoman. ♥ I'm so glad you wrote things.

[soaked_in_stars]

And p.s. the touching pretty much killed me dead.

[jackmaybenimble]

I like killing you dead. In the good way. Been too long.

(You know what I want? I want the MM scene reshot, and him gently kicking her foot when she's eating pie on the grass. Kk, thks.)

[docfraiser8]

him gently kicking her foot when she's eating pie
I'd publically advocate for that.

[docfraiser8]

Andy is so his 'look around and you'll see me'.
And knowing the song, hearing it in my ears while, in my mind, seeing her singing it?!
Homigod. That would be mother effin hawt. My boys and Bird singing that song together? Wow. Good image. Wow. /fangirl.

I love the way she pulls it out of him. She draws everything from him slowly and softly and it really works, because it's not necessarily something he wants to keep to himself. The dialog is so on in some places that I can see the scene happening.

Clr is right, it's not an ep that really shouts Andy/Toby to me but you've found a way to draw the relationship into it and I'm so so happy that you put the effort into it. I know I was being annoying.

This line breaks me:
Her green eyes are warmer than the air against his skin.
I'm not quite sure why. Looooove.

[jackmaybenimble]

*squishesyouforever*

It's not a patch on what I wanted for you. I heart you for the song which sparked me. And you werent ever annoying, you don't know how.

That was a yesterday line. Right when you were emailing me. It's yours.

[docfraiser8]

That song means something to me, good or bad. I wanted it to mean something for someone else too. I'm glad it worked.

That was a yesterday line.
I take sole possession of it then.

[krazykitkat]

I'm very late, but I'm here.

Gorgeous, I could hear their voices so clearly.

[jackmaybenimble]

You're always greeted with open arms, no matter when you may turn up!

Thank you, love. Been a long time full stop, and longer for their voices. (Because they're usually too busy doing other things to speak.......)