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[jackmaybenimble]

It's been a long time and a lot of inconsequential words. But this is for docfraiser8. She knows why. (There's also a line for soaked_in_stars. You'll know it when you see it, face.)

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[soaked_in_stars]

WORDS!!! And such lovely ones at that. This is fantastic, and not at all an episode I would think about with them but chriiiist, it makes such perfect sense.

And I love this -

“We’re not having this conversation.” // “Well one of us may not be.”

PERFECT. The voices are so them throughout this, especially the Congresswoman. ♥ I'm so glad you wrote things.

[soaked_in_stars]

And p.s. the touching pretty much killed me dead.

[jackmaybenimble]

I like killing you dead. In the good way. Been too long.

(You know what I want? I want the MM scene reshot, and him gently kicking her foot when she's eating pie on the grass. Kk, thks.)

[docfraiser8]

him gently kicking her foot when she's eating pie
I'd publically advocate for that.

[soaked_in_stars]

Oh, I vote so yes on the kicking and pie. Asdlkfj.

[jackmaybenimble]

*Hugs you*

It was the song that did it. It sparked a thing. A Toby thing. And I just remembered that ep, because he'd done such a huge thing and was all alone with it. And he never should be, because she's always somewhere, just there. And I liked the idea of her watching him quietly, taking note of who he meets with. Sneaky girl.

It's been such a long time since I've written dialogue OTP. Usually its just smut.....

thank you, sweet one.

[docfraiser8]

the song that did it. It sparked a thing
Clr must listen to said song as well.
Because she is Clr and I loves her so.
And she's one of the ones that songs like that are meant for.

::poke::

[jackmaybenimble]

We do indeed love the Clr.

I'm going to post this (probably at nine innings) when I sort out a disclaimer snd the lyrics.

*pokagelekwoah*

[soaked_in_stars]

He is so never alone. Nevah. I loved that callout. I think he really does forget that a lot, but she's always there.