Fic: A New Light, Merlin/Arthur, G

Mar 01, 2009 21:41

Title: A New Light
Author: Bonster (jacklemmon
Rating: G
Disclaimer: This is purely not-for-profit fan fiction.
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur
Challenge: Mini Exchange fic for heartofoshun via the awesome merlinarthurfqf
Prompt: I only see you
Summary: Merlin casts a revealing spell on himself.
Warnings: Fluffishness?
Notes: Unbeta'd, so if there are glaring errors, please do tell! :D

On to the story! )

fic: merlin, fic: pairing: merlin/arthur, fic: character: arthur pendragon, fic: character: merlin

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putana March 2 2009, 08:52:58 UTC
YAY, this was cute and awesome <3 ...and a nice refresher during the break I took on the fanlisting ;)

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jacklemmon March 3 2009, 00:00:51 UTC
Awwww! Yay! I'm glad you liked it, dahling!! *snoooogles*

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heartofoshun March 2 2009, 08:57:34 UTC
This is an absolutely fabulous story. I love the premise of color only for the one you love. Favorite line: he sees a spot of color over at the field where the knights are training But, course!! Also liked that Arthur kept looking at him and smiling during the feast--almost as though he knew.

OK, maybe a little fluffy--but, in my opinion, if I love a story, I cannot consider it fluff. Fluff is reserved for kittens and chubby cherubs and carrying on about things that don't push my buttons. This one was terrific. It did push all the right buttons for me: silly, oblivous Merlin and Arthur, love magic, and a happy ending.

Thanks so much for the story!

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jacklemmon March 3 2009, 00:05:25 UTC
This is an absolutely fabulous story. I love the premise of color only for the one you love.
YAY!! I'm so happy! I was hoping you'd like it. I had great fun writing it. :D

Fluff is reserved for kittens and chubby cherubs and carrying on about things that don't push my buttons.
You know, I think I'd be terrified if chubby cherubs actually DID show up in a fic. But you know what? If it's going to happen, it will definitely happen in a Merlin fic, lol. I mean canonical unicorns for pity's sake. *pets show*

It did push all the right buttons for me: silly, oblivous Merlin and Arthur, love magic, and a happy ending.
That? Is utterly fantastic AND a groovetastic compliment! Huzzah!

*snooooooogles*

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overchay March 2 2009, 09:47:23 UTC
Oh, this is just adorable. Arthur letting Merlin pet him and thinking he's on something is just. Just. So cute.

This managed to be both cute and in character, so: lovely. Just lovely.

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jacklemmon March 3 2009, 00:06:44 UTC
Awesometastic compliments!! Thank you so much! Very glad you dug the story and think they're in character. That's fantastic. :D

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ronsoftie March 2 2009, 10:17:17 UTC
Oh, this was wonderful and made me smile all the way through :D

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jacklemmon March 3 2009, 00:07:27 UTC
Awwww, yay! :D

Thanks for the comment!

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joymaro March 2 2009, 11:39:03 UTC
This was precious and wonderful!

I love the whole premise.

Bravo!

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jacklemmon March 3 2009, 00:09:10 UTC
YAY!! Thank you so much! I'm glad you dug it!

And thanks for merlinarthurfqf in the first place. It's brought me a lot of joy (oh crap, that's a bad pun.... Pretend i says that it's brought me a lot of giddiness!) :D

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joymaro March 3 2009, 01:00:19 UTC
LOL!

I forget that my username is joymaro, even though I changed it to that ages ago. I always think of myself as joeyrz.

Thank you, for being part of the fqf and making it awesome.

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