Comments | jacinth21: Rébellion et honte

jacinth21

Rébellion et honte

Jan 12, 2005 15:45

Un vieux poème...

J'ai soulevé sa main à mes lèvres:
fumée de cigarette, de savon et de parfum--
rébellion et honte--
demeurant dans l'odeur
de ses bouts de doigt.

... écrit par moi.

La traduction ici.

Comments 19

brandinsbabe January 12 2005, 13:57:44 UTC

translation?

jacinth21 January 12 2005, 14:54:50 UTC

Right here.

brandinsbabe January 12 2005, 15:05:35 UTC

beautiful

jacinth21 January 12 2005, 15:08:16 UTC

Thanks. :)

absolutely beautiful. words are so much prettier in french. swayaway January 12 2005, 15:49:23 UTC

I'm surprised I understood that, seeing that I haven't spoken or written French in ages!

I can't wait to start taking French again.

Re: absolutely beautiful. words are so much prettier in french. jacinth21 January 12 2005, 15:59:17 UTC

Yeah...I miss my Russian speaking skills... :(

chefrico101 January 12 2005, 17:44:34 UTC

lovely

jacinth21 January 13 2005, 12:41:00 UTC

methexis January 12 2005, 19:49:02 UTC

C'est tres chouette, merci. T'as ecrit ca a quel age?

Cordialement,
J.

jacinth21 January 13 2005, 12:44:07 UTC

I understand the first line, but have I.......acts? I don't understand the second; Russian is my passion and I only know a little French. :)

♥ Tali

methexis January 13 2005, 19:22:39 UTC

Heh. Just asking at what age you wrote that.

Cordially,
J.

jacinth21 January 14 2005, 10:04:40 UTC

17 or 18.

hello_sugar December 26 2006, 13:30:59 UTC

Tali,
its helen (secretlybroken) add my new journal sweetheart!
xx