I decided to read this special fic here in LJ. Here,in my country the younger twin is the one who born first :) Couldn't wait until they become teenager, and for the YunJae :D
Glad you did bb. I prefer getting comments here in Lj since I won't ever get it deleted as it could be in aff.
Oh, really? O_O I didn't know that. Interesting. ^_^
I think they become teens in the next chappie, so you don't have to wait long. :D Hahaha, as for the yj bit, it won't be till way towards the end. Don't get your hopes up though bb. It really is only an 'appearance'.
smiles cheekilychoclavenderjmNovember 5 2013, 07:54:32 UTC
*yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee *cringes as i typed this letters* I am dying of sweetness from these two boys. aww..papa han is getting so workaholic but less lovable to mama han...
soulfighter babies are so cuddly and sweet. those puffy cheeks i wanna kiss and pinch at the same time. older minmin is so protective but also getting tired of seeing jae bb being bullied. how cute and adorable these two are.
this chapter is moving at the pace i want so far. are you going to add more characters? just curious.
Re: smiles cheekilyjaceniNovember 6 2013, 02:58:39 UTC
I'm happy you're liking it bb!! Especially with your distaste with incest. They were sweet, weren't they. ^_^
Glad it's going at the pace you enjoy. There will be a total of 15 chapters (the epilogue is part of that count) and I'm not planning on adding to what I've written. :) I've already finished this fic bb, so it sucks knowing that I know but you guys are barely going to find out. I just hope I don't accidentally give something way thinking you guys know about it already. O_O
Yay! I'm happy you research the title!!! ^o^/ You don't know how much I debated what to call this fic without making it sound like something I'd heard already. And then I came upon this word and it just fit. =D
AH!!! So they do have telepathic connection! Soon they'll master their radar senses when who's close and what not. Let's just hope they don't get on each others Too late they're already irritating each other when one's strong the other is meek. Suffering from bulling because of his looks.
ROFL at the gif. XDDD Thanks for the unexpected gift. XDDD
AH!! THANK YOU BB! Even when I've completed a fic you can help me out! I didn't know what to name this thing I was writing, but telepathy fits the bill perfectly! ^__________^ Yes, they do, but it's not the thought kind that they have. ;D Sadly, you won't see whether Jae learns well from Min or not (since I breeze through their childhood), but for sure Jae does learn to fight. ^_^
Yeah, sadly the parents didn't get their happy ever after. Guys can be stubborn as fuck when they want. O_O ROFL, the dark lord? XDDDD Funny bb, funny.
Thank you for commenting!!! Even if I'm sad that I know information you don't (usually I enjoy discovering along with you guys what a story will end up like) I'm happy to have your interesting comments. =D See ya!
Glad you were surprised by that. :) I liked that scene too. Ya know, it's been a while since I've been around 2 year olds. The last 2 year old I met was about a year ago and that girl was hella smart. She was able to sing most of Lady Gaga's Poker Face song and clearly too. Talkative little girl too. So my perception was warped. ^_^ I believe managing 3 consecutive words can range on the above average for normal 2 year olds. ^_^ So just think of them as above average intelligence (which because of their gift you can easily believe). ^^ And I didn't see more than 3 consecutive warped words, so yeah... they're above average kids but not in the genius category. More growing up in the next chappie. ^_^ And angst all around!
You're welcomed bb. Thank you for reading and commenting! (^_^)v
based on observing a lot of kids nowadays, they can talk like that...there are some exceptions too but what you have written is acceptable. and i guess being a fanfic writer myself makes me think differently too. i give freedom to other writers how they attack stories using their own ways.
just a piece of explanation. sorry if i butt in if i am not allowed. i could remove this if someone is offended.
Re: toddler talkjaceniNovember 7 2013, 20:11:37 UTC
Nah bb. No offense taken and your free to butt in all you want. :D. Oh, thanks for the insight on that. Good to now they aren't considered too above average. It goes better with the fic this way and that I wasn't too off the mark with toddler speak. ^_^.
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Really? O_O Hahahaha, it felt weird doing it, but yup, there you have it. Jae call's Min Hyung. ^.^
Thank you for reading and commenting bb. (^_^)v
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Here,in my country the younger twin is the one who born first :)
Couldn't wait until they become teenager,
and for the YunJae :D
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Oh, really? O_O I didn't know that. Interesting. ^_^
I think they become teens in the next chappie, so you don't have to wait long. :D Hahaha, as for the yj bit, it won't be till way towards the end. Don't get your hopes up though bb. It really is only an 'appearance'.
Thank you for reading and commenting. (^_^)v
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I am dying of sweetness from these two boys. aww..papa han is getting so workaholic but less lovable to mama han...
soulfighter babies are so cuddly and sweet. those puffy cheeks i wanna kiss and pinch at the same time. older minmin is so protective but also getting tired of seeing jae bb being bullied. how cute and adorable these two are.
this chapter is moving at the pace i want so far. are you going to add more characters? just curious.
thanks for the fast upload! *huggles*
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i am also going beyond the limit of loving these two as a couple.
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Glad it's going at the pace you enjoy. There will be a total of 15 chapters (the epilogue is part of that count) and I'm not planning on adding to what I've written. :) I've already finished this fic bb, so it sucks knowing that I know but you guys are barely going to find out. I just hope I don't accidentally give something way thinking you guys know about it already. O_O
Yay! I'm happy you research the title!!! ^o^/ You don't know how much I debated what to call this fic without making it sound like something I'd heard already. And then I came upon this word and it just fit. =D
Thank you for reading and commenting bb! (^_^)v
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AH!! THANK YOU BB! Even when I've completed a fic you can help me out! I didn't know what to name this thing I was writing, but telepathy fits the bill perfectly! ^__________^ Yes, they do, but it's not the thought kind that they have. ;D Sadly, you won't see whether Jae learns well from Min or not (since I breeze through their childhood), but for sure Jae does learn to fight. ^_^
Yeah, sadly the parents didn't get their happy ever after. Guys can be stubborn as fuck when they want. O_O ROFL, the dark lord? XDDDD Funny bb, funny.
Thank you for commenting!!! Even if I'm sad that I know information you don't (usually I enjoy discovering along with you guys what a story will end up like) I'm happy to have your interesting comments. =D See ya!
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Glad you were surprised by that. :) I liked that scene too. Ya know, it's been a while since I've been around 2 year olds. The last 2 year old I met was about a year ago and that girl was hella smart. She was able to sing most of Lady Gaga's Poker Face song and clearly too. Talkative little girl too. So my perception was warped. ^_^ I believe managing 3 consecutive words can range on the above average for normal 2 year olds. ^_^ So just think of them as above average intelligence (which because of their gift you can easily believe). ^^ And I didn't see more than 3 consecutive warped words, so yeah... they're above average kids but not in the genius category. More growing up in the next chappie. ^_^ And angst all around!
You're welcomed bb. Thank you for reading and commenting! (^_^)v
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just a piece of explanation. sorry if i butt in if i am not allowed. i could remove this if someone is offended.
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