Speechless, Ch.1

[iyeshana]

Title: Speechless

Chapter 1: Lack of Voice

Rating: T (coarse language, mild sexual content, adult concepts)

Genre: Romance/Fantasy

Characters: Yuyi, The Inventor

Preview: “I was drawn to magic, and he explained that science was something very magical to him. I fell in love with the idea of magic, the fantasy that I could be who I wanted to be.

Comments

[meagan4dominic]

[is dead]
That was just beyond amazing!!! I loved it soooooo much, and thanks for the little mention at the beginning. I'm so happy that you wrote this fic and I can't wait for more

I love the fantasy elements of it spliced in with the reality of a young girl being kicked out of home and living with a complete stranger. I think you've captured The Inventor perfectly and I love how you've gone right back to their first meeting, I can't wait to see how you develop this story.
I love that they didn't tell each other their real names. I thought that was a really awesome touch.

It was the same angel as his tattoo, but a woman. - I love this whole part about her being his angel twin, so gorgeous and sweet. I also really love Taylor's tattoo so I'm glad you gave it a mention

The sex scene was so hot and romantic!

I'm just in complete awe over how amazing this is. There is so much potiential lying in this story and I am so excited to read more!!!

[iyeshana]

Thank you so much ! that's very sweet

[anonymous]

this is flawless! this fanfic is full of magic:D can't wait for the next chapter! *teehee*

[iyeshana]

aw thank you :) I'm working on it !