Comments | iwantmyhamato: [FIC] My S Vol. 3: Torn: Chapter 9

iwantmyhamato

[FIC] My S Vol. 3: Torn: Chapter 9

Jan 13, 2011 11:45

Title: My S, Vol 3: Torn
Author: moon1084
Editor and Chief: fi_chan
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC 17
Genre: Violence, Sex, Romance, Drama
Length: 9/9
Graphics: unknowntibidip
Summary: Seoul’s undercover detective Kim JaeJoong has one goal in his life and that is to dispose of all of the guns that stain the streets of South Korea. It’s one hard goal, without a doubt, an overwhelmingly ( Read more... )

volume 3, jaejoong, my s, jaeho, yunjae, yunho, yoonjae

Comments 133

iwantmyhamato January 13 2011, 17:47:49 UTC

Birthday spot for my lovely jlie_ly

jlie_ly January 13 2011, 17:55:43 UTC

I LOVE YOU ^____^ *SQUISHES*
read it asap <3

jlie_ly January 14 2011, 18:17:57 UTC

aish, shit happened. i'm glad Yunho is okay now, but Jaejoong <.< this man really had me worried. He's so stubborn. god i hope nothing would happen to him.
btw, imma say this again,i really like that evil HBIC Junsu here, and Yoochun is whipped XD
the first 3 paragraphs were really sweet <3

iwantmyhamato January 13 2011, 17:48:16 UTC

Second birthday spot for yunjae_luv

iwantmyhamato January 13 2011, 17:49:07 UTC

Third birthday spot for yuki_3

yuki_3 January 23 2011, 21:21:21 UTC

I'm really sorry for the late reply D8 *slaps self* life was harsh on mer T^T *sobs sobs*

I really loved this chapter T^T .. I was shocked when yun got shot, confused and probably hurt, cause OMG why? And all of a sudden? And who ?!!!!

if I was this emotional how was jae?
I'm not gonna shoot you like everyone else XD cause OMG I finally could see Jae admitting his feelings even if he didn't say it, HE was the one who went to Yun, he kissed him first, he tucked him under the covers and he asked him to wait for him :'DDD

I'm really glad that Jae is finally opening up, even if just slightly...

and I can't tell you how warm it was when Yunho asked about his hurt hand even though he was the one being shot on a hospital bed ;____; *hugs YunJae*

This is getting really complicated.. I still have so many questions :'DDD is LiYin working for Junsu? and why the hell does the police want to resign Jae? I'm still confused >_so this VOL finally ended :'DDD Congrats bb *hugs u* .. you're an amazing author, I can't wait for more of this.. ( ... )

lovelysasusaku January 13 2011, 17:51:41 UTC

SPOT NINJA SPOT OMG UPDATE I CANT THINK

layla_zala January 13 2011, 18:00:04 UTC

im going to take a spot here, and come back about.....8 hours later?
^^

layla_zala February 14 2011, 11:24:19 UTC

oh, i guess it takes me more than 8 hours.....hehehehe

i really really didnt even have anyone to point finger at.
not yoochun, not junsu..
since it might be someone unexpected, it could be someone who'd been totally nice before

not changmin? or maybe even geng or chul?
anyway, i'll still be looking forward to the new updates^^