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Mar 15, 2008 11:13

Title - Gluttony (7/7)
Pairing - Unnamed/Xabi Alonso, Alvaro Arbeloa, Fernando Torres
Rating - R
Disclaimer - Not true
Summary - Last one. Promise. Short and sweet. A team of rooms.

Choose your own narrator. He is, indeed, nameless.

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paulii_oh_yesh March 15 2008, 22:18:23 UTC
its amazing. i love the way you wrote this. i havent seen the others sorry abt that. but this was perfect. i still cant work out who i'd have as the narrator actually, and that certainly adds a mystery to it. this is loved. :)

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ivorylasenza March 17 2008, 08:50:08 UTC
Thank you dear. The others are around if you get bored. Not sure if I tagged but, yeah.

Thanks.

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xabisgirl March 16 2008, 00:06:56 UTC
Wow. Loved this. What fantastic imagery. Especially loved the Xabi one, but that's probably because I especially love Xabi! Thanks for sharing this.

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ivorylasenza March 17 2008, 08:50:20 UTC
<3 thanks. Glad was okay.

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mrflibbleseyes March 16 2008, 00:56:20 UTC
As ever, lovely descriptions and imagery. You really have a way of bringing the words to life.

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ivorylasenza March 17 2008, 08:51:48 UTC
Aw thanks. Glad was okay.

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aglaiya March 16 2008, 02:32:47 UTC
Alvaro is sunroom.....
That was beautiful! I haven't a narrator... Don't need one.
Thanks for writing this series!

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ivorylasenza March 17 2008, 08:51:16 UTC
Can be anyone you like. Though, I thought Finnan, tbh.

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aglaiya March 17 2008, 12:15:00 UTC
Finns is not a bad idea...

I don't want to bother you, but is there any chance you'll write your AU fic to an end?
I imagine many posible endings, but it doesn't work... it's your fic and I really love it!

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ivorylasenza March 17 2008, 13:26:07 UTC
To be honest, probably not. I lost all faith in myself and I just did not think anybody would be interested. Finish it, if you like!!!

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pinpops March 16 2008, 02:48:16 UTC
Brilliant. The description is amazing. Love this.

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ivorylasenza March 17 2008, 08:50:55 UTC
Am glad <3

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