Comments | ivorykiss: Uninvited (An Unfortunate Slight) - Bizarroe - NC-17

ivorykiss

Uninvited (An Unfortunate Slight) - Bizarroe - NC-17 - 13/??

Aug 15, 2008 02:22

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bizarroe, fic: uninvited (an unfortunate slight), chlark, fic, smut, smallville

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ivorykiss August 16 2008, 21:39:32 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really happy you gave it a chance and liked!

firebunny August 15 2008, 13:41:05 UTC

Love the descriptions here with the greens and golds and the prolonged clenching shivers. Very sensual.

This line
She smiled against his chest. Wasn’t that always the way she felt around Clark?
has me worried. I'm not sure Chloe can distinguish between Clark and Bizarro anymore and that may cause problems later.

ivorykiss August 16 2008, 21:41:13 UTC

Thank you kindly! I'm glad you enjoyed!

Chloe's a smart gal. Trust me. *eg*

lilbreck August 15 2008, 16:43:55 UTC

I squeed when I saw you updated this!

ivorykiss August 16 2008, 21:42:11 UTC

Yays! I'm happy you were pleased!

simplytoopretty August 16 2008, 01:32:15 UTC

Loved it. The imagery here is so wonderful. This story is so very intoxicating.

ivorykiss August 16 2008, 21:43:22 UTC

Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm really glad you're enjoying!

Yeah :) an update! anonymous August 16 2008, 02:26:02 UTC

I'm very happy you updated and did not abandon this fic. I can't wait to find out what the new symbol on the cave wall is and what it means. I also look forward to what happens when "the real" Clark finds "the fake Clark " Bizzaro and Chloe.

Lora

Re: Yeah :) an update! ivorykiss August 16 2008, 21:45:21 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed! I'm sorry I'm such a sporadic updater. What can I say, I'm a slave to those evol little muses.