Comments | ivorykiss: Uninvited (An Unfortunate Slight) - Bizarroe - NC-17

ivorykiss

Uninvited (An Unfortunate Slight) - Bizarroe - NC-17 - 09/??

Dec 31, 2007 06:34

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bizarroe, chlark, bizarro, smallville, chloe, clark, fic: uninvited (an unfortunate slight), fic, smut

Comments 21

angelbsb December 31 2007, 12:19:00 UTC

what she has been with the real clark all this time? then who is with the martian manhunter? i will just have to wait for the next part to find out .keep up the great work .

ivorykiss December 31 2007, 12:58:21 UTC

Umm, no, Chloe is with Bizzy and Clark is with the MM. I'm sorry if I confused you. (and anyone else) The next part does explain a bit more.

And thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying this!

angelbsb December 31 2007, 19:16:59 UTC

that's ok .this is getting so great . ok coolness . have a great new year talk to you soon .

ivorykiss January 2 2008, 06:04:59 UTC

I hope you have a great new year's too!

tariel22 December 31 2007, 13:54:38 UTC

I'm intrigued, where does Clark end and Bizzy begin? How much of what he feels came from Clark, and how much from his own heart? And what is Chloe going to do? Thanks for updating again so quickly! I can't wait to see what happens next!

ivorykiss January 2 2008, 06:06:15 UTC

Thanks! I'm really happy you're enjoying! :D

lilbreck December 31 2007, 17:40:51 UTC

I so love this new twist! Makes you love Bizzy even more!

ivorykiss January 2 2008, 06:11:30 UTC

Yays! I'm glad you likes!

Bizzy love is an insidious thing, isn't it? :p And I'm so in lust with your icon. I wants!

lilbreck January 2 2008, 06:40:30 UTC

Snag and use if you feel the need. It is a thing to drool over.

ivorykiss January 3 2008, 09:13:13 UTC

Snags and huggles. My Bizzy! *whee!*

And properly credited, of course.

mediaville December 31 2007, 18:29:40 UTC

Rowr. I love how you write Biz so... animalistic. There's something about that scene when Chloe is looking out from the cave and he joins her that reminds me of the scene in the remake of King Kong when Naomi Watts wakes up and she's laying in Kong's hand and she looks out onto the miles of jungle below them. Not that I had ever entertained the thought of Kong and Naomi screwing for hours though. *shakes head and blanches*

In any event, I love this story, and I really am enjoying Bizzy's conflicted emotions between hating/fearing Clark and wanting to BE him. Plus the sexy body and impressive libido are nice touches. :-)

ivorykiss January 2 2008, 06:18:38 UTC

Thanks so much MV, I'm happy you're enjoying!

Hee... I likes the rowr! Bizzy does have all of Clarky's dark and twisted thoughts and none of those preachy papa Kent filters. He's alot of fun to play with.

Yikes! Did so not need that Kong/Naomi image! Thankyouverymuch! Please pass the brain bleach! :p

Again, thanks! I'm really glad you likes!

rjchasez January 1 2008, 05:53:14 UTC

...Becca's confused.

Damn it.

ivorykiss January 2 2008, 06:20:14 UTC

Aww Becca. I didn't mean to confuse.

What part has you confuzzled? I'll try to answer anything you have questions about.

rjchasez January 2 2008, 06:24:36 UTC

Bizarro actually believes he's Clark now... say WHUT?

ivorykiss January 3 2008, 09:23:17 UTC

Heh. Well... umm... that you're gonna just have to wait on. Or you can take some hints on what uberwillow says below. :p