Seeking Constructive Criticism

[ivory_iris]

I decided to enter a contest I ran across, and am posting the poem I plan to submit here. Sure would appreciate any constructive criticism before sending it off. Thanks. *S

Comments

[vintagebutch]

You've always been my favorite poet.. and that will never change.. I am sure you will win the contest.. anything you set your mind to.. you get.. *w*

[endivee]

I dont know that I am qualified for constructive criticisim but I really can get the feel of your working day in this poem. I like your descriptiveness as it is the vehicle to the motion of your poem.

Thanks

[ivory_iris]

Roses are red, violets are blue,
I'll keeping on soaring with supporters like you!
lol
Thanks for your encouraging comments.
I guess I ought to just bite the bullet and submit,
what have I got to lose?

Re: Thanks

[endivee]

I say go for it. If nothing else its just fun participating. :o)