Close your eyes, dream alone (When you arise, you will be home)

Jul 08, 2010 16:24

Title: Close your eyes, dream alone (When you arise, you will be home)
Author: ivesia19
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: pre Dean/Castiel
POV: 3rd limited
Summary: What he sees in the dreams doesn’t paint a full picture of anything, but he still looks.
Disclaimer: Fiction. Fabrication. False. Other “f” words. The characters belong to Eric Kripke and the C.W. The ( Read more... )

supernatural, fanfic, slash

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dark_cygnet July 9 2010, 14:32:30 UTC
Hey there! Welcome to the community! I think you will love it here, lots of great people and fic and art and...well you get the picture. *g* Really, really enjoyed this fic, so well written and the emotions and thoughts you brought out were wonderful. I'm looking forward to seeing alot more from you with Dean and Cas and Sam. thanks for sharing this with us. Take care!

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ivesia19 July 10 2010, 16:32:28 UTC
There really are a lot of great writers and artists here!
Thank you for reading and commenting - I hope to write more for you all!

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fannyt July 10 2010, 00:27:08 UTC
Oh you. &hearts (Hello, it feels like ages ago!)

This is lovely. You capture Castiel especially well, with lines like this:

“I wish to talk to you, Dean”

and this:

He’s seen people doing this before as a way to stop others from talking

Your descriptions of Sam (huge shoulders moving up and down :D) and his voice are great, as well. And of course, I just love your writing in general. It fits this pairing to a T, too. Really dream-like and soft and pretty.

(Oh, and this:

All the dreams they share seem to revolve around the ridiculous.

...I just love that line.)

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ivesia19 July 10 2010, 16:33:17 UTC
It has been ages!!!
Thank you so much for the thoughtful comment, bb - you made my day :DDDD

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ivesia19 July 10 2010, 16:34:21 UTC
Yay!!!!
Thanks for reading, bb!!!!

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vasiliki August 21 2010, 00:47:58 UTC
Again: I. Loved. This! <3
It's unbelievable how much you write Castiel just like I have him in my mind! (Accidentally, I'm also new in the SPN fandom - could that be it? New fans who don't have preconceived notions of the characters and don't see them through fanon lenses yet?)

The final paragraphs of your fic are begging you for a sequel! Please, give them what they want! :D

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ivesia19 August 21 2010, 02:39:53 UTC
It could just be that we're both super awesome.
Possibly.

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