Comments | ivesia19: Close your eyes, dream alone (When you arise, you will be home)

ivesia19

Close your eyes, dream alone (When you arise, you will be home)

Jul 08, 2010 16:24

Title: Close your eyes, dream alone (When you arise, you will be home)
Author: ivesia19
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: pre Dean/Castiel
POV: 3rd limited
Summary: What he sees in the dreams doesn’t paint a full picture of anything, but he still looks.
Disclaimer: Fiction. Fabrication. False. Other “f” words. The characters belong to Eric Kripke and the C.W. The ( Read more... )

supernatural, fanfic, slash

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ivesia19 July 10 2010, 16:20:09 UTC

Oh, lord. PATD sort of dictated my life for the longest time. It might still, if we ever get that record out!
And sorry, no sequel. If you do indeed look through my story list, you'll see that I like ending fics rather ambiguously. It's my curse!!
But more Dean/Cas, definitely!

stfu_pwentzz July 9 2010, 02:14:07 UTC

:D I loved this

ivesia19 July 10 2010, 16:20:21 UTC

Thanks, bb :D

starsoblivion July 9 2010, 03:21:35 UTC

Wonderful and lovely.

I loved your use of imagery in the dreams.

ivesia19 July 10 2010, 16:21:35 UTC

Thank you so much!

mf_luder_xf July 9 2010, 07:08:16 UTC

Understated, a dream-like quality, a slow build. This was a lovely peek into a world after 5x22. I enjoyed the way you brought out subtle differences about Sam and how Castiel just sits and watches them sleep. Several great lines.

I'd love to see more from you.

ivesia19 July 10 2010, 16:23:51 UTC

Thank you so much!
I hope to write more in this fandom, but, for some reason, Dean/Castiel ideas don't come easily to me :(
Hopefully, that will change!

orbiting_saturn July 9 2010, 07:25:51 UTC

That was quiet and lovely. It felt very much in character. Your Castiel voice was especially good. It had that quality of otherness, without being too robotic or clueless, like he can sometimes be portrayed in fics. I'm really glad you joined the SPN community and look forward to reading more of your stuff.

ivesia19 July 10 2010, 16:28:08 UTC

I find writing Castiel and Dean in character insanely difficult (maybe because I'm so new), so it means a lot to me that you think they weren't crazy OOC :D

orbiting_saturn July 10 2010, 21:55:47 UTC

I'm sure being new has little to do with it. I've been trying to write a decent Dean for months and it doesn't work for me. So you should definitely applaud yourself for managing it so well.

Do you mind if I send you a friend request? I'd love to be alerted when you update.

ivesia19 July 11 2010, 01:11:58 UTC

Sure!!!