leave you drowning until you reach for my hand (1/2). harry/louis, nc-17.

[likecharity]

Title: leave you drowning until you reach for my hand
Author: likecharity
Pairing: Harry/Louis
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: D/s, rough sex, overstimulation, spanking, facials, facefucking, unprotected sex. Mentions of bondage, face-slapping, and humiliation. Under-negotiated BDSM which leads to the discovery of limits. (But everything is all right in

Comments

[mowglimoonshado]

omg SO INTENSE

[candycrazy654]

Continue this PLEASE??? I might die if you dont!

[likecharity]

There's a part two, the link is at the bottom!

[asherlev1]

OMFG. YOU MADE ME CRY. Witholding affection is NOT cool, Louis! I mean, it was insanely hot at the beginning, but then you could tell how hurt Harry was by Louis' behavior and GAHHH I am literally sobbing right now.

But gosh. I am just in awe of you. Brilliant writing, brilliant set-up; the way you just get inside the characters' headspace is AMAZING. My favorite stories about D/s are the ones that get into the PYSCHOLOGY of it. A+ on that! <3333

[likecharity]

That was so hard, seriously - I WANTED it to be hot, but of course it all gets tinged with sadness once it becomes clear how uncomfortable Harry is, and I didn't want to make it seem like I was saying "but the sex is hot so who cares?!" you know?

Thank you so much. ♥

[eviljellybean88]

unf!!! louis picking out harry's clothes and then harry not thinking he's doing it right, my heart, all the feels *whimpers*

[likecharity]

♥

[shiplarry]

CAN I SUE YOU FOR BEING PERFECT?!?!? Everything about this is amazing you should be so proud!!!

[likecharity]

Haha thank you so much!! ♥ I'm so glad you enjoyed it.