Comments | itunescuddle: leave you drowning until you reach for my hand (1/2). harry/louis, nc-17.

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leave you drowning until you reach for my hand (1/2). harry/louis, nc-17.

Jun 20, 2012 15:48

Title: leave you drowning until you reach for my hand
Author: likecharity
Pairing: Harry/Louis
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: D/s, rough sex, overstimulation, spanking, facials, facefucking, unprotected sex. Mentions of bondage, face-slapping, and humiliation. Under-negotiated BDSM which leads to the discovery of limits. (But everything is all right in ( Read more... )

kink: overstimulation, kink: d/s, words: 15-20k, kink: rough sex, kink: spanking, kink: humiliation, kink: comeplay, rating: nc-17, kink: pain, pairing: harry/louis, kink: bondage

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likecharity June 22 2012, 09:50:10 UTC

Awww! Thank you. And good luck. ♥

almightybrows June 22 2012, 00:10:54 UTC

I'm going to be a creeper and agree with the above comment and say that I haven't even gotten halfway (stopped exactly where the above comment mentioned actually) but this is already giving me intense feels and I just can't even handle this right now o m g how do you even do this.

I might come back to praise you after finishing this if I'm not already dead. Just letting you know first how happy I am you filled this prompt and just. Brb while I cry x

likecharity June 22 2012, 09:50:36 UTC

Awww okay, good luck with the rest when you feel up to it!! ♥

jtsbbsps_dk June 22 2012, 19:53:14 UTC

fuck you you're making me cry and it HURTS motherfucker

likecharity June 22 2012, 20:04:23 UTC

IT'S OKAY

THE NEXT PART WILL MAKE IT ALL BETTER

HOPEFULLY

♥

jtsbbsps_dk June 22 2012, 20:07:38 UTC

it iiiis it is making it all better and i love it and my heart is being mended, but fuck that was tough to get through and one of the reasons I've put off reading this for a bit, because my mental state wednesday and thursday? not very stable, so I really couldn't read this. today is much much better though and loving their love so much and URGH, I just want it for myself.

You're the most amazing ♥ ♥ ♥

likecharity June 22 2012, 20:57:04 UTC

It was really tough to write, so I totally understand!! I'm glad you got through it. ♥ Thank you!

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ext_1272232 June 24 2012, 01:01:28 UTC

Oh my god! next chapter pleeassee!!!

likecharity June 24 2012, 09:00:02 UTC

There's a link to part 2 at the bottom.

tallestman June 25 2012, 08:25:53 UTC

The following comment was written as I read:

"Lou," Harry mutters in a sort of urgent voice, "w-which shoes?"
"I dunno," he says, shrugging, "your trainers? I don't care."
Literally just said "Bi-hi-hitch!" to my computer. Loving this already *keeps reading*

If I could, I would quote back to you the entire fucking scene with Liam on the phone. Holy shit. I wasn't even particularly aroused, it was just so... suspenseful. You made sex suspenseful. I think that might be a new one.

"Hey," Louis snaps, hands sliding into Harry's underarms to drag him back up to his feet. "Did I tell you to do that?"
This gave me a visceral reaction; my chest and throat clenched up and equal parts of me wanted Harry to tell Louis to fuck off, throw him on the bed, and just suck his dick anyway or! be a little bitch like what you wrote because yes.

Harry immediately dives forward and sucks Louis's cock right back down, Louis can't help gasping out a, "Oh, fuck-good boy-!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And how the praise ( ... )

likecharity June 26 2012, 12:29:15 UTC

Eee thank you so much. ♥♥

Ugh, I'm so glad you liked the phone scene in particular because I got so stressed about that. I wanted it to be hot, but I didn't want that to be the main focus because there's so much going on there emotionally as well. I think 'suspenseful' is a really good outcome, so yay!