Illusion

Aug 25, 2011 20:51

Title: Illusion
Paring: JongKey
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: top!key slut!jonghyun and non-descriptive rimming.

A/N: Finally, the request fic for epikey which would have be posted three hours ago had i NOT accidentally deleted it and had i NOT had to rewrite it. Honestly, I think how it was before was better AND how it is now is better. Both times I wrote it had ( Read more... )

request fic, fandom: shinee, pairing: jongkey, rating: nc-17, !au

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epikey August 26 2011, 08:16:57 UTC
/throws hands up/ OMMMMMMGGGGG INCOHERENT RIGHT NOW
WILL GIVE A LONGASSED COMMENT WHEN I AM COHERENT OMG OMG OMG
ACID WASH JEANS OMG OMG OMG
YOU HAD ME DOUBLE AT ACID WASH JEANS OMG I LOVE ACID WASHED JEANS I HAVE THREE PAIRS OMG OMG OMFG OMFG

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itsasecretx3 August 26 2011, 15:02:28 UTC
^O^ i love acid wash jeans too!!!!!! i have a weakness for guys that wear acid wash jeans (zhou mi, like all the time, ung)hahaha !

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epikey August 28 2011, 10:19:04 UTC
Hey! I'm Mr. Dimple! /insert intro music for mr. simple/
I came back to comment after wearing out acid wash jeans uh huh
I STILL DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY IS IS STILL INCOHERENT SINCE, well, it's my request, AND I GET TOPKEY AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. Enough.
Frankly Bling's tongue is illegal. End of story. And Kibum's eyebrows too, during the replay era. /whenwillyouacceptrequestsagain-puppyeyes-/

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itsasecretx3 August 28 2011, 10:43:04 UTC
kekekeke you're cute~

bahahahaha are you sure you trust me to do requests again? i mean, i only took like a month to get you your fic ^^;

*sobbing buckets and apologizing deeply*

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epikey August 29 2011, 03:30:14 UTC
QURL YOU TRIPPIN. you took less than two weeks, where did the months come from???!

But seriously, do tell me when you're taking requests again. And your tumblr URL /insert eerie stalker laughter/

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itsasecretx3 August 29 2011, 04:58:24 UTC
Hahahaha okay it felt really long anyways >__<

I have dos tumblrs, one is brand new and one has been going for like 2 months but isn't really a personal one. Which one you want bb? ^_~

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xxaylnxx August 29 2011, 23:51:00 UTC
Girl,that was hot.I'm not a fan of Jongkey but cockslut!jjong is always relevant!^^

... )

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itsasecretx3 August 30 2011, 03:39:11 UTC
hahaha thank you so much :) i'm glad you liked it <3

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itsasecretx3 September 7 2011, 22:40:58 UTC
hahahahaha i love this comment. i love gif comments. you made my day <3

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linnhe September 29 2011, 02:57:49 UTC
I'm sad that you lost your original story but I can't really believe the old one was better than this, because damn T_T

There were so many things I absolutely loved about your story; the fact that you made first person really work, Jonghyun constantly sticking out his tongue, how they meet at a club and leave together just to have a good time and not to angst over whatever (you know, like real people ^^), how you made the use of a condom feel natural and not like 'I should be a responsible author and make them use one', instead it just increased the believability, the way you described Jonghyun laying there in the dim lighting, him offering a beer omg, just.. the whole fic, really :D

:3333
I like you

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itsasecretx3 September 29 2011, 03:00:04 UTC
Aigoo~~~ one of the best comments I've received on any of my stories ^^ thank you so much~~~

i likelove you ^3^

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