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[itsarift_thing]

Title: Memory
Author: mad_jaks
Characters: Unnamed OMC (possibly alien - definitely different)
Genre: Drabble, AU
Rating: G
Prompt: tw100: creepy child
Notes: Filling in the gaps of Remembrance
Beta: The superbly rapid rustydog
Disclaimer: Not mine - making no money

Comments

[rustydog]

I love the contrast between the happily playing children (ponytails!) and the boy's mental torture, especially the temperature imagery and the word association.

Such an interesting character, and great drabble!

[itsarift_thing]

Thank you, you are a darling - I really wanted to play up that contrast but really didn't want to come from an external POV looking at "him" (because I am rather fond of him).

:D

[donutsweeper]

ooooh, perfectly creepy. Me likes

[itsarift_thing]

Thanks hon'

[topgeargirl2]

This was very good

[itsarift_thing]

Thanks sweetie :D

[aeron_lanart]

The contrast between 'normal' kids and him is skin crawlingly creepy, and sad at the same time. Love it!

[itsarift_thing]

*glows*
Thank you!