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[itsarift_thing]

Title: Falling Down
Author: mad_jaks
Characters: Adam (on Tosh)
Genre: drabble
Rating: PG13
Prompt: tw100: missing scene
Summary: Nearer and nearer draws the time, the time that shall surely be
Spoilers/Notes: Missing scene from Adam.
Disclaimer: Not mine - making no money

The latest companion piece for Down Among the Dead Men and Condemnation

Comments

[donutsweeper]

ooooh, so evilly dark. I love it.

[itsarift_thing]

Speedy :D I Only just finished tagging it in the comm!

He was very evil :D

[donutsweeper]

Quick at the click I am. :) And yes, Adam really was.

[temporal_witch]

This was amazing.

I hated Adam for using Toshiko like that, preying on her craving to be loved. You did a fantastic job protraying his thoughts.

[itsarift_thing]

Thank you :D

I've been having fun- okay, not fun exactly - getting inside Adam's brain during that time when he was banged up and Jack was busy upstairs getting rid of him.

Which reminds me I need to link back to the other ones!

[aeron_lanart]

Yay, you did the Tosh related one!

I love the insights you give into Adam's psyche, I think the almost a pity bit is spot on.

[itsarift_thing]

I did. I did!

Everyone telling me to do it helped a lot - his relationship with her was driving me insane! On the one had he was using her and on the other, I think at some level and in a very perverse way, he connected with her in a way he didn't with any of the others because he - in whatever form he existed in - saw himself as a victim-

And, right now, I have no idea if that makes any sense at all so I am shuttign up!

[itsarift_thing]

haNd not 'had' *facepalms*

[kel_reiley]

o... nice

[itsarift_thing]

Thanks
You are the only person to have seen the WIP version ;-)

[kel_reiley]

i feel special
this made me glad adam DIED horribly

[topgeargirl2]

Cool you posted it.

very good. I never liked Adam.

[itsarift_thing]

I did. I did :D

And thanks for commenting - Adam didn't have a single redeeming quality, poor sod.