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Learning [FMA, Ed x Al, for 24hour_themes]

Jan 05, 2007 12:57

Title: Learning
Author: hales731
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairing: Elricest~! ♥
Rating: Meh, G
Theme for 24hour_themes: 2100 -- Comprehension of universal truth.

( They think he knows the Truth... )

writing: fanfiction, *hales731, anime/manga: fullmetal alchemist, themes: 24hour_themes, writing: themes

Comments 6

yma2 January 5 2007, 23:07:08 UTC

Interesting. I like the way you showed the dependence of Al on Ed, the idea that people look up to him. It's good. Not one of your best perhaps, but still good.

bramblerose4 January 7 2007, 01:48:38 UTC

I love how Al is completely lost without Ed. The search for him is the only thing he needs, saving or destroying the world, even Truth can wait.

You did a wonderful job for a first post. I look forward to reading more from you!

lavaliere January 7 2007, 02:08:15 UTC

Thanks~ :)

box_of_doom January 7 2007, 02:11:45 UTC

I like the deprate feel to Al's tone here. The fact that he needs his brother. And what lies beneath the surface, in dreams and such. Very nice. ^^

himura_arimikoe January 7 2007, 09:41:40 UTC

I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more from you. Epic first post!

sleepdebtfairy January 7 2007, 10:46:07 UTC

Love this. ♥ Added to memories. It's so Al.