Comments | ithurtsmybrain: #16, Mulder/Susan -- Title: Bedroom Eyes

my_daroga in ithurtsmybrain

#16, Mulder/Susan -- Title: Bedroom Eyes

Jun 14, 2006 15:33

Title: Bedroom Eyes
Fandoms: X-Files, The Chronicles of Narnia
Pairing: #16, Mulder/Susan
Word Count: 1,316
Rating: PG
Notes: Don’t own, yadda yadda.

“What are you doing here?” She looked down at where he lay on the couch, her slight, inverted figure at odds with the imperious cast of her voice.
( I don’t suppose telling you that you’re in my bedroom will do any good )

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ghostwritten2 June 14 2006, 23:32:24 UTC

Two characters I really feel for, encountering each other against all odds, and a stolen moment of connection and happiness, out of time, for two people who need it. Just lovely. This is really touching.

And this sentence is perfect: "Finally, proof of alien contact, he
thought, and I'm making out with it." :)

my_daroga June 14 2006, 23:47:42 UTC

Thank you so much, Ghostie.

(And thanks for repeating yourself for the world to see ;)

ghostwritten2 June 14 2006, 23:49:53 UTC

I hope you don't mind that I did that. :) I wanted to put my reaction to your coolness on public record. *^.^*

my_daroga June 14 2006, 23:50:39 UTC

Hey, I can't complain about that.

sailorcoruscant June 15 2006, 00:14:03 UTC

I love it.
And although it's perfect as it is, I'm left wanting more. They're so cute together!

my_daroga June 16 2006, 13:55:34 UTC

Thank you! I'll take the wanting-more as a measure of how much you liked it--I too think it needs to end there, but it's always tempting to keep a good thing going.

gollumrox June 15 2006, 00:22:10 UTC

Hiiii. Spoofmaster told me to friend you so it would be funny.

And did you see like every Phantom of the Opera ever made? From the looks of your icon it appears so. My friend and I are trying to do that. We have one left I think.

Forks

my_daroga June 16 2006, 13:56:09 UTC

I think I've seen most of them. When I was younger I made it a point to collect all of them, and I'm still on the lookout. Good luck!

gollumrox June 15 2006, 00:23:30 UTC

...ohhh. Didn't realize this was a story. Now I feel like a jerk for writing a comment on it without mentioning anything of relevence.

Sorr-eeee.

Forks

hermionesviolin June 15 2006, 00:48:41 UTC

Oh, this is so interesting. And that end line is an evocative setup for a motivation behind Susan's changes in The Last Battle.

my_daroga June 16 2006, 13:56:29 UTC

I was hoping people would pick up on that. Thank you so much!