Fanfic Flame Rising July Challenge

[ithexamimi]

The goal was to make a cliche work, and I chose the Life Note cliche.
Oh, and it had to end in a certain line that I cannot tell or else...yeah.

Original

Title: Bring You Back

Summary: “Ah, so you have obtained a Life Note, shinigami-san?” “Hyuk, yeah.” “…I would like to see the notebook, if I may.” A Life Note cliché improved. Mello x Near. Written

Comments

[yurameki_tenshi]

;-; Awww that was....sadly sweet. Lols, it makes me happy the two are together again...but ;-; Mello's going to have to die like...every year? That's sad ><

Loooved the writing though <3

[ithexamimi]

=) Thank you for commenting!
Yeah, I really don't want Mello to die again, but...you can't forever bring a person back to life.
I didn't want it to be too...cliche. (Most OC's who bring back L or whoever usually resurrects them forever). But I wanted this to have it's downside as well.

-hugs-

[yurameki_tenshi]

Yeah x3 it was GOOD that you kept it a bit more realistic and not so cliche, giving it that edge, but it's still sad to think about ^^; I'ma sap, lols.

[ithexamimi]

Do not worry, my friend.
-pats back-
I felt a little sad as well when I decided one year. (Near's a little selfish, sadly.)
I'm very glad you liked it that it was real. =)

[raven_mirta]

I agree with the comments above. I love how this story is more realistic, in terms of how long Mello has to live again. Nothing too sappy there. :D

I really do enjoy this story. I wish I could see Mello in pink. XD

[ithexamimi]

-glomps-
Thank you. ^^
I heart you for saying that.(And I'm glad you liked the story!...it was long, but blah.)

MELLO IN PINK = WIN>!!!!!!!!!1