First Love

[infinitas]

Her face was one that of utmost patience, serene expression a fold to the noisy atmosphere. Hands folded primly on her lap, legs dangling off the edge of the seat, she was the picture of pure innocence

Comments

[vanivore]

Oh god, I almost cried!
That was SO sweet. It really was amazingly written as well.
You captured Jasper quite well, and I loved reading Alice as smitten and lovestruck.
I positively adored this fic.

[infinitas]

Thank you! Yes, I loved writing the part where Alice was pulling the flower's petals. :)

[infinitas]

Perfect timing, eh? :D

Yes, that's what I think so too! Alice and Jasper's relationship is more of the spiritual kind.

[hp_is_my_poison]

That is the sweetest thing I have ever read.
I love Alice/Jasper, and you wrote them so well.
Great fic. :]

[infinitas]

Thanks! And I love your icon!

[always_hidden]

That was really good! It was way more believable that some of the other A/J stuff that i've read.
I loved the way Jasper seemed like a true southern man. Loved it.
*devine darling*

[infinitas]

Really? Haha. I tried my best to make it as in-character as possible.

Ooh... yes. The 'ma'am' and the 'ducking of the head' is pure hotness. XD

[hpfanme]

oh, that was so cute!! i love it... yay!

[infinitas]

Thank you!