First Love

[infinitas]

Her face was one that of utmost patience, serene expression a fold to the noisy atmosphere. Hands folded primly on her lap, legs dangling off the edge of the seat, she was the picture of pure innocence

Comments

[teamxcullen]

Oh God I'm all teary.
That last line was pure genius.
Just beautiful=]].

[infinitas]

Haha. Thanks. I love writing the endings like that - gives it a very profound feeling, you know? :)

[teamxcullen]

Yeah, definitely.
Really well done=]]

[infinitas]

Thanks, yet again.

*hugs*

[sunlitstar]

Very sweet, and incredibly well written. I enjoyed it.

[infinitas]

I am glad you enjoyed it!

[offthebalcony]

that was insanely cute & this line;

“I have been singing that tune like a songbird ever since I met you, love.”

was my favourite =]

A/J FTW! ♥

[infinitas]

Haha. Yes! That was my favourite line as well!

*giggles*

It just suddenly came to me as I was writing, and I was like, 'Cool. I ought to put it down somewhere...' And I did!

Alice/Jasper is just the most adorable thing ever!

[joebob1379]

Oh, that was just so sweet. I love it. Absolutely love it. <3

One thing I noticed: Alice thinks about her mother and the asylum in this fic, but really she doesn't remember anything about her human life and she doesn't know where she came from until James tells Bella in the dance studio...

[infinitas]

Thank you!

Umm... can I say oops? I kinda forgot about that. Thanks for telling me though - you are really observant. :)

[thirteen_skater]

That's so sweet! I love your portrayal of Alice, and the rain at the beginning and the end was nice. Great story!

[infinitas]

Thank you!