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Being Human: Good Times, Bad Times [Hal/Cutler + ensemble] 4/?

Mar 01, 2013 01:05

Title: “Good Times, Bad Times”
Author: Shaitanah
Rating: R
Timeline: canon divergence mid-Episode 4x08, “The War Child”
Summary: When Cutler comes to Honolulu Heights with the purpose of killing Eve, it is Hal who opens the door. And he doesn’t let him enter. From here on out, it’s either a horror show or a sitcom. Cutler is not quite certain what ( Read more... )

ch: other, gen, being human, ch: alex millar, fanfiction, ch: nick cutler, slash, ch: hal yorke, p: hal/cutler, ch: annie sawyer, ch: tom mcnair, tv

Comments 8

non_canonical January 31 2013, 22:47:40 UTC

Another chapter. Woo hoo! \o/

Ah, the isle of Grimsay! XD It was good to see Yvonne and Adam back, and I thought you'd got Yvonne's voice - in particular - spot on.

I always enjoy the cultural references in your stories - from Bowie to Tolkien. And Rentaghost, of course. I grew up watching that show. :D

It was great fun having Cutler lurch from one mishap to another. Of course he'd manage to get whammied by Yvonne.
And of course Hal would be in Cutler's dream about his deepest desires. ;) Because not even a succubus can stop him being obsessed with Hal. LOL

And the sense of history between Hal and Cutler was great here. Little snippets, but enough to give such a vivid picture.

“You never had trouble collecting your debts before. We’ll think of something.” - Ooh, I can imagine! XD

“Some of us didn’t have a choice either!” Cutler snaps. “Like maybe their makers forgot to ask them.” - I'm still loving Cutler with a spine! <3 ( ... )

istne_pieklo January 31 2013, 23:03:28 UTC

I try not to allow myself to get depressed by the impending series 5. XDD ( ... )

rosalui January 31 2013, 22:51:10 UTC

:D

*claps*

istne_pieklo January 31 2013, 22:53:42 UTC

Merci! XD

shirogiku January 31 2013, 22:52:01 UTC

I figured I'd stop playing the braindead card and comment here, for once, instead of all over the place.

But nope.

I missed the Bowie reference bc I only know like four Bowie songs XD

istne_pieklo January 31 2013, 22:55:11 UTC

All over the place is fun too. ;))))
The ref is "the film is a saddening bore", from here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dMi9Pj3NZbU

shirogiku January 31 2013, 23:07:25 UTC

that song I do know from Life on Mars.... or so I thought >

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istne_pieklo February 5 2013, 11:14:06 UTC

I'm glad you liked the chapter! <333
Adam is such a nightmare to write! I even rewatched Becoming Human and I'd rewatched 4x05 not that long ago, but UUUUGH! I have no idea how to handle these two, so I was really nervous about this chapter ( ... )