Comments | istahire: Teach me, Kuchiki-sensei…

istahire

Teach me, Kuchiki-sensei…

Jun 04, 2008 11:28

The bowstring was pulled taut, though there was no visible tension, no shake in his arms or torso; every part of his body was perfectly still and poised as Kuchiki Byakuya aimed for the small painted target at the other end of the small courtyard. His eyes narrowed and he let go of the two gloved fingers holding the feathered quiver between them. ( Read more... )

fanfic, bleach

Comments 24

mitsu_syusuke June 4 2008, 07:16:30 UTC

*squealing like a crazy fangirl i am*
go, renji! he definitely know how to catch his taocho's attention! XD

istahire June 5 2008, 02:14:17 UTC

Hehe, that he does XP
Thanks for reading ^_____^

heukya June 4 2008, 07:58:37 UTC

*Squeal* Three hours... three hours... three hours... Pr0ns singing in my head~ three hours... (...)Teaching archery part, very detailed!

istahire June 5 2008, 02:24:06 UTC

We all know that Byakuya really enjoyed those 3 hours just as much as Renji did ^__~
Thanks for reading XD I've archery lessons before so I know exactly how Renji feels >_

meiroh June 4 2008, 08:55:17 UTC

It was great ^^

istahire June 5 2008, 02:24:21 UTC

Thanks! ^____^

pseudo_shigure June 4 2008, 11:14:21 UTC

awesome first completed fic! =]

and hihihii.. 3 hours of sex in the rest area is.. hihi.. only Ranji could do that..*still giggling*

istahire June 5 2008, 02:25:24 UTC

Thank you ^___^

Oh yeah, the reason Renji trains so hard is so that he can enjoy himself with Byakuya for a loooong time XP

shynishyshallow June 4 2008, 13:42:50 UTC

This was really beautifully written.

The idea, your style, a nice, smooth flow of the plot... just everything the good fic needs. And, and uke!Byakuya! *_* You have absolutely no idea how much I love him like this; still in character, with his sharp tongue and arrogant attitude, but not being able to resist in the presence of the other one. And beside Renji with his affection, desire, not holding back, little, sly Renji. I could almost hear the gears in his head work at his evil plan. xD ("Just as planned... kukuku..." <- Raito mode on. xD)

And you ended it in such a sweet way! Satisfed Renji with Cheshire cat grin made my day, and the whole image while they were making their way home was just adorable.

Yeah, I can understand not being confident about writing smut. It's sometimes gets annoying when people fiercefully wants to add some sex and they totally fail. -_-"
BUT if you actually tried... xD

Well. Glad you shared! :)

istahire June 5 2008, 04:44:09 UTC

Wow thanks so much for the compliment! *blush* And thanks for reading! ^________^

Yay you like uke!Byakuya too! To me, Renji x Byakuya is the only correct way to pair them! XP But Byakuya can still be the boss of the relationship even if he's uke XD It's up to Renji to figure out how best to put his 'intellect' to good use!

They're so perfect for each other they really deserve a sweet ending XD I'll just leave to the reader to imagine the stuff they get up to, I'm sure that you can come up with much hotter stuff than me XP

Glad you enjoyed it! XD

shynishyshallow June 5 2008, 11:14:00 UTC

No problem, really liked it. :)

Sure I did! I like uke!Byakuya in almost every gay relationship he's put in. xD And Renji's from the street, he's a very practical guy. *nods nods*

It's not my OTP for Byakuya, but still, I like fluff stuff about them.
And you know, it's always nice to read... x'D