Teach me, Kuchiki-sensei…

Jun 04, 2008 11:28



The bowstring was pulled taut, though there was no visible tension, no shake in his arms or torso; every part of his body was perfectly still and poised as Kuchiki Byakuya aimed for the small painted target at the other end of the small courtyard. His eyes narrowed and he let go of the two gloved fingers holding the feathered quiver between them. ( Read more... )

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hu3long2 June 4 2008, 19:49:24 UTC
Archery as seduction-- though I'm not sure who was seducing whom!

Don't worry about the ... um... lack of smut. Three hours was evocative enough! And the archery lesson before that as well.

Love the sweetness between them, and the beginning section where just the feel of Renji's reiatsu can make Byakuya dizzy!

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istahire June 5 2008, 06:24:42 UTC
They can be seducing each other ^__~ That would make them even closer as a coupld XD

Thanks for reading! ^____^

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chaoticmayhem June 4 2008, 23:07:10 UTC
kawaiiiiiiiiii. its such a lovely fic.

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istahire June 5 2008, 06:25:00 UTC
Thank you! ^______^

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sandamazwich June 4 2008, 23:57:10 UTC
OMG That was so completely, amazingly, AWESOME!

I giggled. Lots.

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istahire June 5 2008, 06:25:51 UTC
Aww *blushes* thanks! I had a lot of fun writing it so I'm glad you enjoyed it ^_________^

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annieroo2 July 10 2008, 03:29:36 UTC
Hey great job with the first fic!!!

I totally loved the archery lessons as seduction, it was very erotic.

LOL!! 3 hours?! I'm surprised Byakuya can walk at all. XD

This really was very lovely. Congratulations. :D

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istahire July 11 2008, 07:31:34 UTC
Thank you! *blush* It is a very nice sport, perfect for Byakuya <3 and the uniform definitely compliments him ^__^

I think I may have exaggerated with 3 hours XP ... Well, Byakuya has lots of reiatsu, he can take it XD

Thanks for dropping by! *hugs*

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annieroo2 July 13 2008, 00:18:02 UTC
LOL!! Well with these 2 strong and beautiful men three hours might not be totally out of the realm of possibility. XD Maybe only the first hour was energetic and the next two lazy exploration. ;p

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saluli December 30 2008, 22:52:19 UTC
Wow! They really have a lot of stamina indeed....
I like it very much

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istahire December 31 2008, 13:15:08 UTC
Thanks for reading ^__^

Renji would always have stamina when it comes to Byakuya =P

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