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[iskender]

I slept under the stars that night, the slap of water sending tremors from the bottom of the raft all the way up through my belly and head, the whole structure tugged by the weight of chains drifting down below into the unseen

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[claidheamhmor]

I like that; very evocative...

[iskender]

Thank you! This is tangentially related to the story I'm working on (at 12k words so far) and is virtually unrelated plotwise. Still, it was an image that I wanted to pour out, since it seemed done.

[redqueenmeg]

"Their way of thinking was not yet apparent to me."

It's like tech support customers!

I love you. Thank you for reading this to me last night. I could really picture it happening.