You (Boondock Saints fic)

Jan 06, 2010 11:18


You
Author: is_mise_free
Rating: nc17
Warnings: Small amount of SelfInjury, Self Hatred, and angst.
Disclaimer: *Looks in Pants* Nope I dont have  a huge dick, therefore I am not Troy Duffy and I sadly do not own anything in this story.
Note: I have never written like this before and it just popped in my head when I was taking a bath.
Summary: One of the ( Read more... )

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drainbamage954 January 25 2010, 14:30:39 UTC
Oh I liked this. I liked this a lot. The sorrow is palpable. Absolutely wonderful darling.
Plus, you've given the challenge to figure out who is who, which is hard. My immediate reaction would be to say Murphy, considering he is the one who I see are more to the wind and likely to test the borders of a relationship. However, I doubt Connor would just take the cheating lying down, nor come back without yelling at Murph for being as stupid as to hurt himself. In which case, Connor's wild personality would be more likely to cheat and not be able to explain to Murph, who is more likely to just leave in a dark cloud and return the same way. And I do see Connor being depressed enough to drop to self abuse. I could see either of them doing so. UGH! Anyway, I'm going to say it's Connor primarily based on his volatile personality and the other twins reactions, which I see more characteristic of Murphy than Connor.
...Did I get it right?

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is_mise_free January 26 2010, 03:28:52 UTC
Thank you so much! That is a great review! Ummmm You are right! It is Connor I was thinking of. I like the way you talked it out, giving the reasons it was Murph who was infact the cheater and the reasons behind it and than inturn figured out it really was Connor who was the cheater and self harmer. Brilliant job! Thank you again for the comment!

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drainbamage954 January 26 2010, 19:01:14 UTC
Yay!!! Go deducting skills! I figured I might as well explain my reasoning. Plus, you had me thinking there. Depending on the interpretation, it could be either twin and it's only the subtle things which made it identifiable. I repeat, excellent job. I'd love to see more stuff from you!

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