Simple Touch

[irishunicorn03]

Title: Simple Touch
Episode and Theme: 5.12 - Reckoning/Hands
Rating: barely PG
Summary: Knowing when a simple touch is enough.
Spoilers: 5.12 - Reckoning
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Author's Notes: Words in parenthesis are taken from the deleted scene. The summary is a line from Bones 1. 19/The Soldier in The Grave.

Comments

[irishunicorn03]

Thanks!

Yeah, I'm a big fan of callbacks to previous episodes, so I loved using that line.

[_touched]

Ooh, points for the Bones quote. I absolutely love it, when fandoms collide and make with the goods! :)

And, Lois, you had her absolutely spot on. And that's me being politely dismissed, I could picture it so clearly in my mind. I wish we would have been given a small scene similar to this one, in the episode itself.

Because, really, you should be writing the episodes for Smallville - at least the Clark/Lois scenes, of this I'm srsly convinced. :)

Thank you, for participating in the challenges this month, and I hope that you feel just as inspired to do so next month as well. We should have challenges up tomorrow and all that good stuff. *g*

[irishunicorn03]

I have always, always wanted to use that line from Bones so I loved that I could use it for this challenge.

Aww. :blushes: Thanks so much for the sweet compliments. They really mean a lot.

I really hope inspiration hits as well. I adore writing for these two.

Oh, and I'm totally in love with your icon.

[_touched]

It was a great way to use it, too. So, kudos! :)

You're more than welcome and you totes deserved them. *g*

Well, we do have the new challenge posts for this month, up over at the comm. :)

Hee, I kinda love it, too!

[brdwaybebe]

-weeps- What a beautiful story! You have such a lovely talent for description too. The dance of his fingers on the coat, hesitation wrapped around her like her jacket

Okay maybe I like jacket imagery lol

Anyway this was very well done - I will enjoy seeing much much mofr from you!!

[irishunicorn03]

Thanks you so much for the lovely comments. I kinda loved coming up with the jacket imagery myself. :)

I'm not sure what episode your icon is from, but her expression is so heartbreaking that I feel the need to reach out and give her a hug.

[brdwaybebe]

LOL And you did amazingly!

It's from...is it Toxic? the one where Oliver gets poisoned. I don't us it much but this story warranted it truly!

[leonhart_17]

aww that is sad and beautiful! I've always loved the relationship between Lois and Jonathan...I've always wished they would have shown more of her reaction to his death...

Beautiful job!

[irishunicorn03]

Thanks!

I've always wished they would have shown more of her reaction to his death...

Oh, me too As heartbreaking as it would have been, I would have loved a scene where she actually finds out. I believe ED could have really rocked it.

[realchemistry]

Very sweet indeed wish we had had something like this, something more than just the look.

[irishunicorn03]

Thanks. Oh, I know. I would have loved a scene where we saw Lois' reaction to everything, maybe even her showing support for Clark and Martha.