Heat

[ireneadler]

Title: Heat
Disclaimer: If you recognize it, it belongs to JKR.
Pairing: Su Li/Lee Jordan
Warnings: Fluff? Passing reference to sex.
Summary: How it all started
Notes: I play Su Li at stoatshead_hill RPG. I was thinking how there's no Su/Lee fic out there, and this came into my head. The plot bunny was all smutty, but I am swiftly realizing that I am incapable

Comments

[acoustics1220]

It's TOO SHORT!

But I like- I really like!

Of course, you had to put in some angst - I think that should be expounded on more, the miscarriages perhaps, though it's a...sensitive subject, I think there could be lots more there.

I liked this a lot, especially the little part 'one-two-three almond-eyed, cocoa-skinned babies'. Lovely honey, Really.

*huggles*

*squee*
♥
~m

[ireneadler]

Oh, I'm so relieved that you like it! This is one of those fics that I wrote for me and don't really care about feedback, but I was a bit worried that you'd hate it. So yes, delighted that you don't. *g*

It is short. I might expand on it, might not. Perhaps I'll write something else, cause I do rather like this universe. As for the miscarriages, Su's body just couldn't handle pregnancy, and she lost the first two. She was on total bed rest for the last three, and they were still born premature. (And even then they were pretty big, considering Su's frame. Poor girl.) I did figure that out, obviously, but I felt it didn't quite fit the tone of the story. The point was that all was *not* sunshine and rainbows. Plus, er, I like a touch of angst in my fluff. Ha.

Seriously, though? Wouldn't Su and Lee just produce beautiful babies? Combo kids are the best. My nieces are definite proof. *g*

*huggles back*

♥