Fresh to death

[iphisto]

Exo, Baekhyun/Kai, NC-17
Sequel to Drippin' Swagu (you probably would want to read it first), still Sk8r boiz AU now with alt title: Skateboarding Is Practically Foreplay For These Boys Anyway
~3500 wordsWarnings: Sexual content, swearing, once again way too much talk about skating.

Comments

[shizukusa]

um i hope you keep writing this au forever because this is just So Great and so so utterly perfect ♥ ♥ just so you know i love your writing a lot! a whole lot! :( if i were to make a list of my favourite things about this fic, suggestive!kai would be #1 okay i love how awkward and how new he is to this and i love how it's getting to baekhyun all the same haha :( i also love how such boys they are throughout, it's really endearing. and i loved the way you describe how they're reeling, especially baekhyun, after the ride down the hill!! that was really nicely written. AND OFC kai blowing baekhyun what do i even say *_* so hot, so good *_* love the build-up and baekhyun TRYING to be considerate lmao

have my heart pls bc this fic was absolute perfection ;_;

[iphisto]

omg you are too nice, thankyou so much for this comment ;~; /cradles your heart

[taozi]

I really liked this. :) They're such teenage idiots here, especially Kai, since he's all act first and ask questions later. I like how the age difference factors in, and how Baekhyun is always just a bit careful with him, even if Kai both kind of hates that and needs it at the same time. I think my favourite part was the physicality of everything--how affected Baekhyun was by skating the hill and how it made him so sensitive to everything Kai was doing after

[iphisto]

Thankyou so much for the detailed feedback! It means a lot to me haha. Trying to keep characterisation and flow without falling into squicky consent issues was hard so I'm glad it was largely a success :) Also thankyou for the compliments about the bj lol /o\ writing Da Pr0n is new to me so i really appreciate it~

[cocacola]

oh my god i wish i had any coherent thoughts for you because i know how important feedback is, but all i can really say right now is 'hehehehe' because i'm still grinning like an idiot. 'you came on my face' is probably the best one liner ever. i love watching them all couple-y and i love this au and i really, really hope you'll continue it (or write more baekai) in the future! thank you so much ;A;

[iphisto]

oh man thankyou, this feedback is definitely more than appreciated. You're so lovely ;~;

[honeyflavor]

totally loved it ♥

[iphisto]

Thankyou!

[kanintallrik]

perfect fracking sequel, i must say. horny dbags are glorious. “I was thinking that I would blow you,” is so beautiful like caring and selfconscious and nervous and cocky and loving and mature and immature all at the same time. it was the perfect way for him to phrase it.
errrything is sexy baekkai and nothing hurts, memming this too. <3

[iphisto]

Ah thankyou for this comment and the mem you're too nice ;_;