Comments | iphifix: Double-Edged Sword (Merlin)

iphifix

Double-Edged Sword (Merlin)

Nov 15, 2009 15:50

Fandom: Merlin
Pairing(s): Arthur/Morgause
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 354
Notes/Warnings: Pure ridiculousness. Unbeta'd. Includes spoilers for 2x08 "Sins of the Father."

( Double-Edged Sword )

merlin, rating: pg-13, fic, het

Comments 4

pyrrhical November 16 2009, 02:51:26 UTC

Huh. Interesting.

ACTUAL COMMENT: this is very fluidly written, and the pattern of Arthur's thoughts is discernible and realistic. Very well done!

iphifix November 16 2009, 02:56:08 UTC

Oh good, I was worried about that. Thanks!

myrimidryad November 16 2009, 19:32:32 UTC

Holy crap. Your icon.

*g*

yue_ix November 16 2009, 18:28:55 UTC

Seconding Anoyo, Arthur's voice is very nice in here, and the title is apt, as you kept the double edge of the heaviness of this situation yet also the humor. Arthur would justify thinking with his desires, yet also wanting to prove himself to him (I really liked "He loves that she misjudged him.") and assessing the situation in other ways.