Adult Boys -- Oneshot

[invisiblehabits]

Title: Adult Boys
Chapter: Oneshot
Author: invisiblehabits
Genre: Light angst/Romance
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Swearing
Pairings: Aki/Kenzo
Disclaimer: Don’t own, don’t know. Won’t make money unless you feel like paying me to read.
Summary: “I love you too,” Kenzo said without a beat of hesitation. “And if you ever keep something like this from me again I’m

Comments

[manabou]

Oh god, this was really, truly beautiful. So many different feelings and phases written so fluently. I hardly noticed that I had finished it. Thank you, I liked it very much. It gave me this happy and content feeling that I can never put my finger on what it reminds me of...

[invisiblehabits]

Oh wow, this comment is really, truly fantastic! I'm really glad you liked it! I don't usually write happy endings, for some reason, but this one....well in the end it just had to be happy!

And I have to ask, cause I checked your profile, you're Swedish?

[manabou]

It really was so so good. :) And (!) I'm glad that you decided on a happy ending this time because I really can't deal with bad endings... :( hehe.

Yes, I am Swedish! :) Or.. I've lived in Sweden all my life, therefore I guess I should count as Swedish. Why do you ask? :)

[invisiblehabits]

Yaaay! Glad you approve! For once a story of mine wanted to have a happy ending! *shock* And I honestly like it better this way! Aki got everything he wanted! <3

He was kinda selfish though, Aki. In that he didn't contact Yuki straight away, didn't take on his role as a father when he first met Naoto, and that he didn't tell Kenzo he had a child for four years... But honestly, I think he got scared, terrified and overwhelmed and so he panicked in a sense. But he grew up I guess, grew into the responsibility, and in the end I believe he'll be a very good extra father to Naoto. With Kenzo there to support him every step of the way. ♥

[miyurii]

love
love
friggin
love <3
fuck.yeah.aki being someone's biological father!
<3
it was so cute and nice to read <3

[invisiblehabits]

Haha, very happy you love it! Aki would be a wonderful father! I have no idea why I believe so, but I think he would! ^^

[anselik]

Quite the unusual way of finding out you got a kid.

I really like how you write these two! Simply amazing.

Love the interaction with kenzo and the kid. I can only imagine their life when she gets older.

[invisiblehabits]

Indeed! I cannot even imagine what it'd feel like to reach such a letter!

Thank you! I love to write them, they have completely taken over my journal! Damn boys, leave some space for other people! ...or not, hehe. ♥

Kenzo is ridiculously sweet in this one! Sweet and proud at the same time. And I have a feeling he'll get along very well with Naoto. Though I also think they'll have quite the arguments as she grows older! LOL!

[suslik_san]

it's interesting how your AkiZo stories always have the same flavor when you think of the wide range of situations you out them in. It makes them look like the pieces of one story even though they eliminate each other.

this one was rather interesting :3

yay for Kenzo the mommy XD

[invisiblehabits]

This is probably one of the biggest compliments I've ever been given. Really, hearing you say that means a lot! I have this idea of how I want them to be, not in real life but as my version of them, my muses or whatever you want to call it, haha. But I try to take this idea of them and apply them to various situations. I want them to change according to the situation, of course, but I still want them to seem like the same people, just going through different things. If I manage somewhat, then I'm happy. ^^

I'm glad you like this story! It was started as something strange, supposed to get a completely different ending, and ended up like this. LOL! I think I kinda like how it changed on me.

Kenzo mummy! XD ♥

[suslik_san]

Oh, so it's intentional, kinda..
Well then, will there be an occasion where the one at fault would be Kenzo and not Aki? It looks like you only like to bring angst upon your Kenzo muse XD and your Aki muse always suffers from guilt ._.

He'd make an awful one, ne... XD

[invisiblehabits]

Kenzo is just so easy to torment! I don't know why, LOL! But I'll try to even out the balance somewhat....perhaps...maybe. Haha, I hadn't really realised it until you said it, but it is sadly true.