Adult Boys -- Oneshot

[invisiblehabits]

Title: Adult Boys
Chapter: Oneshot
Author: invisiblehabits
Genre: Light angst/Romance
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Swearing
Pairings: Aki/Kenzo
Disclaimer: Don’t own, don’t know. Won’t make money unless you feel like paying me to read.
Summary: “I love you too,” Kenzo said without a beat of hesitation. “And if you ever keep something like this from me again I’m

Comments

[siseja]

wow
just wow
this is too realistic
I mean, that IS quite an unusual situation, but as Aki is... pretty much a rock star, that WOULD be the most likely situation, as having babies with Kenzo is obviously enough out of the question xD
I dunno, I've several times tried to imagine similar scenarios before, and this is pretty much it

I really REALLY love how you write those two together, AkiZo that is, you make EVERYTHING always so realistic.

and
I dunno really what more to write =w=
just
love

[invisiblehabits]

Aaaaw, thank you! I like that, that it's realistic. When I write non-AU stories, if that makes sense, stories where they are still Aki from SID and Kenzo from AYABIE, I like to try and keep them somewhat realistic.

As for the situation... Well Aki is, like you say, a rock star of sorts, and he has been known to party wild! I don't know whether or not he's been sleeping around with people, but with his looks I don't think he's ever had a hard time finding bed partners. LOL! And...well...sex do lead to babies sometimes...oops! XD

Thank you! I love to write them together, they fit so well with each other! :3

[atomicbluekitty]

OMG!!!!!!! THIS IS THE CUTEST THING I HAVE EVER READ!!!!! ok, lol, I love this story it's just amazing! Oh my god, she is adorable and zo's reaction is exactly how I would have pictured it. It's really amazing that this happened and I have no doubt that in Aki would be that worried about telling Zo. Makes me wonder what would happen in real life lol. I want to know now how close they are in real life!

I love this story(obviously) and you did a great job! I really like how there is no sex involved and that it's about the emotions and a deeper relationship than sex gives. It truly is amazing!

Thank you for writing it.

[invisiblehabits]

I want to know now how close they are in real life! Now that makes two of us!! LOL!

I'm really happy you like the story too! You seem to think all the pieces fit, from Aki's worries to Kenzo's reactions and Naoto's personality, and it makes me feel very accomplished. ^^

At first it felt weird to write a PG-13 story, with the -13 part added solely for a bit of foul language and heavy drinking & smoking... But like you say, the lack of sex allows the deeper emotions to shine through stronger, the connection and the real deep relationship they do share. In the end I'm happy I never went further than kisses.

Thank you for reading and leaving such lovely comments!

[atomicbluekitty]

I would have written more, but I was typing on an iPhone. That was a bitch. I really like though how you went into the physiological aspect of a relationship, and working that angle. It just was so realistic. I really liked it.

[invisiblehabits]

Oh wow, thank you! I like to try and write realistic, at least when I keep them as Aki and Kenzo from their respective bands. I feel very accomplished if I can make them seem like an actual couple, whether they are in real life of not, hehe/s>.

And at least you have a phone that allows you to comment! *wants an iPhone so bad*

[spider_tears]

awww this was just so sweet and adorable it made me smile and feel all happy! It's a very cute image in my head, the two of them and Aki's daughter XD

[invisiblehabits]

In mine too! I honestly believe Aki would make a really good father, and the idea of him raising a child together with Kenzo is just precious! ^^

[spider_tears]

Indeed it is! XD though if he'd be good or not at it I have no clue or thought about. All I know i he's sexy and fun to draw XD

[invisiblehabits]

Aki and Zo are both sexy as holy hell! Haha, I couldn't draw them if my life depended on it though, so I'll stick to writing them into various situations. ^^

[govi_chan]

So adorable it left me with this warm and fuzzy feeling inside. Also totally up for the idea Zo and Aki as a part-time parents. *giggle*

And good to hear from you. *wink*

[invisiblehabits]

Isn't it a cute idea?! It simply wouldn't leave me alone. Well...the part about Aki being a father wouldn't, the story decided to go and get a happy ending all on its own. But I like it, I want them to raise babies together! LOL!

Thank you, I'm sorry I'm like....the worst at updating my journal! :P

[govi_chan]

I just had to laugh at the "raise babies" part.
The image of Zo and Aki with like half a dozen kids around them popped up suddenly. LMAO!
But yeah like that idea too, v-rockers with kiddos, so it's nice someone wrote that one down. *wink*

Nah it's just like Christmas whenever you post, makes me all the more happy to read something from you. ^^

[invisiblehabits]

LMAO that is an epic mental picture yes! XD

Look at Miyavi, he's a v-rock daddy and still rocking it out around the world! If the adorable ADD case can do it anyone can!

Aaaaaw! Thank you! <3

[farna84]

I smiled all the way through this. :')
Aki as a father... Well, he may not consider himself as a good man not to mention a father, but I think he'd be perfect hubby and daddy.
Uwahhh <3

Kenzo was in quite a tough position, but of course love endures it all. Besides, they make a cute family.

I just feel happy now. (even though my jealous side doesn't want to think about the possible girls or pregnancies Aki may have around Japan, but..... haha)
Thank you for this! It was a nice change to the fics I've lately read or written. :)

Oh, and nice hearing from you, at least once in an eternity! :b

[invisiblehabits]

Thank you, I do too! I can totally picture Aki as a father and I believe he would be a really good one!

I don't envy either one of them in this. Aki had to confess he'd kept a huge secret from his lover for more than four years. Kenzo had to decide if he could trust Aki again or not, not to mention choose between Aki and his own pride. That might sound like an easy choice, but being Kenzo I imagine it's harder than it should.

You are more welcome dear, and I'm glad I could make you happy with this! Last time I believe I made you cry... And I am sorry I NEVER seem to update anymore, I am a bad bad individual! :P