Moss on Stone -- Chapter 03

[invisiblehabits]

Title: Moss on Stone
Chapter: 03/05
Author: invisiblehabits
Beta: tingedwordsGenre: Angst/Light romance

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[velvet_liquor]

Okay, so now the screen is all blurry... And I'm starting to have a headache, I've been crying too much ._.

Kenzo's pain is just... Horrible... And it just shows how much he loved Aki, which in return makes it even more painful because he lost him... The scene that struck me the most was in the previous chapter, when Kenzo told Aki's name for the first time in probably years, then got out of the café... And also the scene when Tora tells Hiroto about his illness... The way Hiroto doesn't know if he should go away or get nearer is touching... And I kinda wonder what I would have done if I had been in Tora's situation... Spending years alone so as to prevent anyone from getting hurt, or try and be selfish but happy... Oh and when Hiroto comes back saying he can't bear behing away from Tora, and that it's probably love... That's just cute and sad all at once <3 é.è same with Hiroto telling Tora he might be falling in love with Kenzo... The kind of love no one really expects nord understands... But I really can't imagine Kenzo moving on

[invisiblehabits]

*snuggles you* I'm sorry I make you cry so much! It's just....I like to cry when reading, and when writing, and....these kinds of emotions, the ones you cannot really do anything about....I like playing around with them a lot. Grief and hurt, death and loneliness. I'm twisted, I know.

Kenzo's pain is probably beyond words to describe, it's one of those things you have to experience in order to understand, and at the same time you wouldn't wish that kind of pain on anyone. I'll be a mean tease and say you'll learn more about that pain in the next chapter, but I don't know when it'll be posted.

The scene where Tora tells Hiroto, well the two scenes really, are one of my favourites actually. I imagine it would be very hard for both of them; for Tora to tell or not to tell, taking a risk and at the same time being selfish, and for Hiroto who suddenly has to decide if Tora is worth that much to him! And the part about Hiroto wondering, thinking, it's love he feels....well he's seventeen and he's never been in love before, not for real

[invisiblehabits]

Thank you! You're right, more will be told about Aki's and Kenzo's relationship. Hopefully it'll make it clearer why Zo is and acts the way he does much like this chapter gave insight to Hiroto. Writing this chapter made me kick myself for having killed Tora, haha!

Thank you so much for commenting!! ^^

[invisiblehabits]

Of course!! Just...lol, bare with my random rantings I've begun posting lately. You don't mind that, go ahead dear, by all means! :D

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[invisiblehabits]

YOU! Are a darling! Thank you for this reminder! <3

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