Candle Wax -- Oneshot

[invisiblehabits]

Title: Candle Wax
Chapter: Oneshot
Author: invisiblehabits
Genre: Romance/Light angst/Fluff
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Malexmale sex, some angst, and if that is a warning then so is fluff!
Pairings: Tora/Hiroto, Shou/Hiroto
Disclaimer: Don’t own, don’t know. Won’t make money unless you feel like paying me to read.
Summary: Placing himself behind the smaller man he

Comments

[shadow_fictions]

I LOVE THIS LOTS AND LOTS.

<3
i really do. The emotions from Pon regarding the bad breakup with Shou are really well written, and all the characterisation is really good.

:D

[invisiblehabits]

Aaw! Thank you! I'm glad you think I made a good job of Pon's emotions, I didn't want him to simply move from Shou to immediately find comfort in Tora. And yay, you like my characters! Must mean I made a good job with portraying them all.

Thank you! <3

[shadow_fictions]

you're welcome :D

[invisiblehabits]

O__O

Icon!! <3

[aya_rockz]

OMG So cuuute! Pon is soo adorable here, and Tora is also fluffy lovable adkbkdkngkdlxzs
lol XD
Tora couldn't stand the cuteness of Hiropon~
I love it!!!

[invisiblehabits]

Tora is ridiculously fluffy in this story! Don't know how or why he turned out that way, haha, but I kind of like him. Certainly wouldn't mind having him comforting me after a breakup! And of course he couldn't withstand the cuteness of Pon, could you?

Glad you liked it! :D

[invisiblehabits]

Oh you make me so happy! I wanted Tora's and Hiroto's relationship to slowly grow, develop from friendship to something more over time, that much I remember from when I started writing at least! Haha. And I'm glad you liked Tora, he turned out rather fluffy, haha, but I guess that was what Pon needed.

ToraPon is always win! Thank you!

[roses_areblue]

Awwww..... cute. Love it : )
Thanks for writing

[invisiblehabits]

Thank you!

[beyondtheremix]

YEAH MAKE PON SUFFER 8D!
But NO! There was lots of fluff lol. It was super cute.

I really like the part where Hiroto was upset over Shou ignoring him and he was really hurt but hid it with anger. It just felt real for me lol. And uhhhhhhh I have been very apathetic about reading anything in general lately so sorry for this pathetic excuse for a comment!!!! D:<3

[invisiblehabits]

A comment is always a comment! And they are aways <3!

But yeah, I'm good at making my characters suffer, LOL! You just wait and see!! I'M A TERRIBLE, TERRIBLE MUSE ABUSER! But I tried to get some fluff in there too, yes, for some reason... Glad you liked it!

And I'm very happy you like that part, cause it honestly is one of my favourite parts as well. I don't know, it just seemed proper for Pon to act upset and angry when he was in fact hurt and sad. I've found people, myself included, often do that.

Thank you Lan!! <3

[beyondtheremix]

Awwww.
I kind of just... shut down LOL. I don't talk much when I'm hurt or sad and I give people one word answers. I keep everything inside until it goes away. I'm terrible LOL *sweats* I know it's bad XD;

LOL My mom tells me not to keep everything in because it's not healthy and then she'll tell the story about to first ever and maybe last time she saw me really angry LOL. I hit my sister over the head with a cookie. And that was my angry moment LAWL~

[invisiblehabits]

Can you be my sister?! (And saying that made me realise I have no idea how old you are, though I doubt you know how old I am either so, lol) But seriously, you hit your sister with a cookie! My sister bit me across the spine when she got pissed at me!! Come be my sister, please? XD

I tend to act like you though when it comes to really big and serious things, those I lock away inside for a long time. It is no good, but....sometimes it's easier, right? At least when it doesn't result in public crying... T_T