Comments | invisiblecake: At least I don't look like a mutant!

invisiblecake

At least I don't look like a mutant!

Jan 29, 2009 00:58

So, I said I was gonna post the first bit of my fic, and I am! Here it is! BTW, it is (supposed to be) a sort of Top Gear/X-Men crossover based on the episode where they were all sick recently (I know the number, but I can't be bothered to look it up at the moment).

Not much happens in this bit. It's kind of set-up, I guess, for things to happen ( Read more... )

xmen, crossover, top gear, plot bunny!, fic

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violent_rabbit January 29 2009, 08:04:57 UTC

MOAR. YES PLS MOAR.

invisiblecake January 29 2009, 08:40:29 UTC

Yay! I'm glad someone likes it!

I need to find that plot bunny again. It has gone missing. *looks under bed*

But when I find it, there will be more!

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invisiblecake January 29 2009, 20:18:33 UTC

palm13 January 30 2009, 01:00:04 UTC

First, extinguicher = extinguisher. Unless that's one of those weird brit v. American things that I missed the memo on. There are a lot of those ( ... )

invisiblecake January 30 2009, 03:07:06 UTC

*fixes typo*

So many things! I'll have to look through my pile of notes and this and figure some things out. But there are a lot of awesome ideas up there! Totally fighting the Germans!!!

invisiblecake January 30 2009, 05:52:10 UTC

I wrote down a lot of things after this... I dunno if I want to use all of it, but I'll run it by you guys ( ... )

mountland January 31 2009, 10:26:21 UTC

heya sorry if I took too long to beta this, next time remember to nag me for it if you are getting bored. (real life is a bitch and keeps on getting in the way of lj).

lol at the idea of a magical zit like zims (i always think that hammond should have his voice dubbed over by GIR)

loving the fic, cant wait for more

invisiblecake January 31 2009, 18:16:40 UTC

Thanks! I'm going to put some of the changes you made in it when I get done with my homework today. And try to write a bit more if I can!