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Week 6

Apr 01, 2008 08:56

Title: The Enemy Within
Author: landofthekwt
Genre: Darkfic
Universe: Canon
Pairing: Inuyasha/Kagome
Rating:PG-13
Warning: Images of blood and extreme violence
Summary: Inuyasha sits with Kagome at the end of Chapter 187 and realizes that the beast within
him will consume his human heart and kill Kagome if he does nothing to stop it.

The only devils in ( Read more... )

*april 2008, author: landofthekwt

Comments 4

minerva_one April 1 2008, 18:22:15 UTC

I like the repetition of certain words in this. And my fave line - even his birth had been a curse . Fantastic!

Nice work! XD

landofthekwt April 1 2008, 19:16:28 UTC

Thank you for your comments. I thought the repetition emphasized the horror of what the monster
felt.

demonlord_lover April 1 2008, 23:10:26 UTC

Are you going to continue this piece? Inuyasha's thoughts on searching out Totousai were intriguing.

landofthekwt April 2 2008, 03:07:59 UTC

I was not planning to do so at this time. My piece expanded on the manga at the end of Chapter 187. I was ( ... )