Hands On Experience

[inugrlrayn]

Title: Hands On Experience
Author: inugrlraynPairing: Roy/Ed

Comments

[sexkitten426]

I love awkward first-time stories, & this one seemed particularly realistic. I like the description of Roy as 'stupidly pretty', & Ed thinking of him as 'that bastard' even during sex was amusingly IC.

[inugrlrayn]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I like "pretty" smut as much as the next person, but it always seems so unrealistic to me, lately I seem to be writing a lot of all the goofy stuff that can go wrong. XD

[willtherebecake]

He glanced warily over at them, as if they might be sneaking up on him while he was distracted.

Stealth Dildos.
I lol'd.

[inugrlrayn]

Oh man, I can't stop cracking up now thinking about them like... very quietly rolling across the bed when Ed's not looking. Anyway, I'm glad it made you laugh :D

[evilchuckles]

Mmmmm.....This is going to my memories!

Yeah...

I'm sorry but Evil Chuckles' brain is out right now. Please leave a message and she'll get back to you...

[inugrlrayn]

<333 Yay! Well, I'm glad you liked it then!

[bamberbabe88]

beautifully cute. Loved the fact that Roy caught him with his finger up his bum, all the thinking of what to do with the toys and maybe getting dressed he didn't even pull out. Too cute

[inugrlrayn]

Ed is so much fun to write, precisely because I could see him doing ridiculous things like that. Thanks for reading, darlin'!

[hellbentllama]

wow. your powers of description are dazzling. :D

[inugrlrayn]

Why thank you!