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Two Part 34/34 AND Epilogue!!!!

Apr 20, 2007 20:55

Title: Two
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fanfiction, fic-author: bluayu, fic-rating: pg13

Comments 17

darth_claire April 21 2007, 04:27:15 UTC

Alright! Now Inui if you had just said that to your parents the FIRST time, the story would have been much shorter you could have have your wedding earlier. Loved the bit with Momo and Kaidoh. Sorry to see it end but happy with how it turned out! Good job!

bluayu April 21 2007, 23:36:00 UTC

XDDDD Yeah wouldn't have been? I like creating drama...so it got drawn out longer. -snicker- ^^ Thank you very much for reading!

yes_rhade April 21 2007, 06:35:55 UTC

Congratulations on finishing the story. I am peased to see everyone happy and in love. Always the best ending.

bluayu April 21 2007, 23:36:53 UTC

^^ Thank you! Yeah I gave it a fairy tale ending...lol..

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bluayu April 21 2007, 23:39:40 UTC

Awwww..

I can't believe it either!!! O__O I'm gonna miss Yuri!!! And Kinomoto!! and...and... I didn't mind at all. I'm surprised people still have read dispite my laziness and slowness to post.

Thank you... Momoshiro's real smart isn't he? He took Kaidoh directly to the problem! XDD

No problem. I love sharing the love! ^^

o__o Ah 3 am writing sessions are baaaad...-shot- I'll fix that...

willowscry April 21 2007, 11:54:27 UTC

Awww!!!

Yeah, I'm speechless. Though..

And at first I thought you were just a determined brat who didn’t want to lose.

That doesn't really sound like something Inui would say, honestly. :/ Because when has he ever called anyone a brat? Especially Kaido. I can get the feeling he's teasing, and yet in such a romantic, off-the-cuff speech... Eh.

Other than that, I loved it.

bluayu April 21 2007, 23:41:57 UTC

^^

Oh THAT line... Maybe it was worded a little badly. -thinks about it- But it was meant to be slightly teasing him.

Glad you liked it. I'll keep notes like that for other fics... ^^ It helps, it helps!

kyoudai_koibito April 21 2007, 15:27:21 UTC

*tackles with love* I can't believe it's the end of the story~! It was a terrific ending. And I totally cracked up when Momo was like "He got locked in a room!" and then realizes they're in front of the whole church. I could so seem him doing that. xDDDD ♥ I'm sad the story is over and happy though. It was terrific. Thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful thing with all of us. ♥ ♥ ♥

bluayu April 21 2007, 23:44:16 UTC

I can't believe it either!!!! -cries- Yes I have an emotional attachment with my fics!!!!!! XDDD Yeah Momoshiro took Kaidoh DIRECTLY to the problem eh? -snicker-

Thank you for reading and liking it. When I posted this fic at first, I honestly thought that people who hate it. ^^ You are very welcome.